This is my monoloque. Critiques please.

[froggie_chan]

Of course I've seen the headlines Miller. "Wanted: Harriet Tubman Reward: $5000

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[dismalbismuth]

So a question about the monologues, what do the (...) mean?
Are you treating the audience as if they were this Miller?

[froggie_chan]

The (...) ish Miller replying.

[quiet_thoughts]

Coolies. :D It explains itself too. I know you told me who she was, but I totally forgot, but the monologue makes it clear, at least to me. You did a good job of telling about her through a conversation, without the conversation sounding forced or queer. Spiffily. ^_^ Can't think of any suggestions at the moment, I'll comment again if I think of anything.