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fridayschild85

Fic: Five Things Jacob Learned About His Daughter From Someone Else

Jan 08, 2011 20:42

Title: Five Things Jacob Learned About His Daughter From Someone Else
Genre: Angst, humour
Rating: T
Spoilers: Tok'ra Pt I and II, Fair Game
Disclaimer: Mine? No? Damn.

( “I love you, kiddo.” The surprised expression on her face lets Jacob know he doesn’t say the words enough. )

sg-1, fan fiction, humour, jack o'neill, hurt/comfort, sam/jack, angst, jacob carter, sam carter, five things, george hammond, writing

Comments 10

sarbear12456 January 9 2011, 02:48:19 UTC

I love this! It's so cute and you got Jacob's POV and reactions perfect. There's a great range of emotions and I love the ending!

fridayschild85 January 27 2011, 00:08:35 UTC

Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it!

onell1 January 23 2011, 19:20:16 UTC

Nice snapshots of Jacob's memories! Aw, of course, I love the shippy dawning of Jacob realizing that Sam and Jack are in love.

fridayschild85 January 27 2011, 00:10:12 UTC

Thanks for reading - I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I wasn't planning on a shippy ending, it just kind of happened... Oh, who am I kidding? Long live the ship! :)

stormqueen280 January 24 2011, 04:29:45 UTC

Great! I love how you describe Sam's personality and how her relationship with Jacob, and how Jacob finds out things about her. Liked them all, the first one is sweet beyond words, and the ending is delicious!

fridayschild85 January 27 2011, 00:11:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Great story! megmeyer January 24 2011, 12:38:31 UTC

I loved it. Especially the first one. Loved how you worked Sam's determination and courage into the early ones, and her intelligence in the later. And loved Selmac being involved, and really loved the Jack/Sam, and that General Hammond knew, but also knows they won't do anything stupid, or before they are allowed. Great insight into Jacob's thoughts and feelings about Sam. Thanks for writing!

Re: Great story! fridayschild85 January 27 2011, 00:13:12 UTC

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

audabee November 15 2012, 08:11:05 UTC

I'm a bit late but...great work. I enjoyed this enormously. Thanks for sharing.