First

Jul 03, 2009 21:14

Name: First ( Read more... )

original, drabble, pairing: bunny/jude, 150-word challenge

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charisstoma July 3 2009, 20:36:44 UTC
[QUOTE]A few seconds later, he doesn’t get a choice. Heaven’s now closed for the day.[/QUOTE]

aaaaah. Parceled out kisses stolen during the day. Nice and evocative.

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frauleinslash July 3 2009, 20:42:30 UTC
Thank you ^^

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skazafraz July 4 2009, 15:16:26 UTC
Nice, short, and sweet. Good job :)

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frauleinslash July 4 2009, 15:32:23 UTC
Thank you :)

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didzease February 16 2010, 20:58:39 UTC
aw! I particularly liked the last sentence :)

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frauleinslash February 16 2010, 21:18:33 UTC
Tanxu muchly ^^

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chibibble March 20 2010, 14:58:03 UTC
I'm never really delved into the realm of (unpublished) original fiction before, but this was sweet and rather beautiful :)

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frauleinslash March 21 2010, 19:47:26 UTC
Hurray for first dives into original fic ^^ It's my favourite =3 Thank you; I'm glad you liked it :D

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chibibble March 22 2010, 07:07:27 UTC
I prefer fanfiction; it seems so much safer somehow. The characters and setting are already there...you can take them out of the setting and create your fanon and well, that's the extent of the originality, eheh~

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frauleinslash March 22 2010, 17:08:11 UTC
I like having my own toys to play with XD Don't get me wrong, I still love writing fanfic; I just see it as exercise now ^^

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