YUSSSSS! We have another chapter! This chapter is slow torture - the will-they-won't-they is killing me, but at the same time, I'm glad that they didn't just jump into bed together, wham bam thank you Jordan (that didn't quite work, did it). I'm liking the slow character development, Isaac is so SUAVE in this ^_^ (probably more than in RL, I'm willing to bet).
I also find the babysitting stuff so sweet, I really like this backstory with Taylor looking after his niece. I guess deep down we're all suckers for 'daddy mode' Taylor because he's just so adorable.
My favourite line must be this:
"I had a nice time."
Isaac smiled. "You're sweet, but all I did was give you a drink."
I can really imagine Isaac as he says that, kind of laughing to himself. Taylor slightly out of his depth in this unusual situation (he's at his former client's house... they haven't even kissed).
I hope the next chapter comes soon! (who am I to speak though)
:D I'm so glad you liked it. I too can see Ike laughing to himself about Jordan thanking him for the nice time. Jordan has no idea what a nice time can be had with Isaac, not yet. :D I'm excited for their relationship to develop and especially excited for the whamming and bamming.
As Always :) I Think you're a great writer and I keep comming back here to see if there is something new. I've read a lot of hanfics over the years, both good and bad and yours are my top favourites! :)
Re: Loved it!forgottenhallJuly 31 2014, 17:40:05 UTC
Aww, thank you! That is really kind. I'm so glad you enjoyed this update and I'm really flattered that you think so highly of my writing in general. <3
:D I am so excited for Isaac's date as well... he definitely has something up his sleeve. :D Jordan really doesn't know what he's in for. :) I'm glad you like how slow they are taking it; I just want them to jump in bed, but, they can not. xD Thank you for the comment!! xx
Ooh can't wait for the date! You are really on fire with this story and I'm finding it adorable and intriguing all at the same time. I too love how they are taking it slow but it will be awesome when they get it on.... lol Can't wait for more!! Well done AGAIN :)
Awwww, you are so kind! I wish I felt as though I were on fire. xD This chapter took me FOREVER to finish! It came at the speed of a snail. I'm glad you enjoyed it though, I really like where things are going between them, myself!:) Thank you for reading and leaving me lovely feedback <3 xox
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We have another chapter!
This chapter is slow torture - the will-they-won't-they is killing me, but at the same time, I'm glad that they didn't just jump into bed together, wham bam thank you Jordan (that didn't quite work, did it). I'm liking the slow character development, Isaac is so SUAVE in this ^_^ (probably more than in RL, I'm willing to bet).
I also find the babysitting stuff so sweet, I really like this backstory with Taylor looking after his niece. I guess deep down we're all suckers for 'daddy mode' Taylor because he's just so adorable.
My favourite line must be this:
"I had a nice time."
Isaac smiled. "You're sweet, but all I did was give you a drink."
I can really imagine Isaac as he says that, kind of laughing to himself. Taylor slightly out of his depth in this unusual situation (he's at his former client's house... they haven't even kissed).
I hope the next chapter comes soon! (who am I to speak though)
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I Think you're a great writer and I keep comming back here to see if there is something new.
I've read a lot of hanfics over the years, both good and bad and yours are my top favourites! :)
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Love all the details about Taylor's life, makes him even more adorable!
Looking forward to see what Isaac has in store for their date. I'm imagining soppy and romantic ( or maybe that's just me wishful thinking!)
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Can't wait for more!! Well done AGAIN :)
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