Third deleted scene (based upon Kayla's Once Upon a Dream) AKA Bathtub Smex

[followthesun1]

This the third, and final (yes Nonna, FINAL!) "deleted scene" that I have written, based upon Kayla's (daydreamer22688) series Once Upon a Dream, or otherwise "affectionately" known as Bathtub Smex.

Dedication: First, I dedicate this story to Magie, as her belated birthday present, and because I know how much she's been waiting for it. Second, to

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[kiss_bang_xo]

Lovely Jenn! i thought its was ace

I loved Nicole' song :D

Hot stuff all that Bath action

Nicole was his, and he was hers, and though he did not know what the future held for them, he had never felt more at peace in his life.

awwwwwwwwwwwww so cute!

awesomeness well done :D

[sgh_intern]

that was really sweet and hot as hades but what stuck out for me most was

"He was dressed only in his britches and a billowing white shirt, open at the neck, and well-worn indoor shoes. His hair was wet and the shadow upon his jaw was growing darker."

Details!Zac in period costume....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[followthesun1]

Yeah, that's pretty much it! lol Funny thing, I first wrote him like that in the other story before Details came out. So it was amazing to see him in those pics, because it was how I had imagined him!

[pearllane]

*thud* Is dead.

Serioulsy Jen, this was some beyond amazing stuff! And you dedicated it to me! *hugs* It was like the best birthday present I got :D I am sad you say this is the finale one but I guess I can live with such a beautiful ending!! Great job as per usual!!

[hairsprayx12]

Yay!!!
*thud*
*ded*
ummm are you sure it's the last one?

[jessica3311]

LUCY!!!!!!!!!!!!! *DEAD*

Your disclaimer made me laugh haha

You are so descriptive...I love it...I could vividly picture everything!

she lifted her head to Zachary and he kissed her, finally.Softly, gently, lovingly.

YAY they FINALLY kissed!!!!!!!!!!!

You effing TEASE...they made love and no details :(

I loved it though but still cough cough TEASE!

[followthesun1]

Bwahahahaha I had to live up to me reputation as Queen Tease!

I can't wait until Nonna reads! She'll have my head on a platter for not describing the actual smex! LOL

[heartonmysl33v3]

you jerk!