Prompt 359 ~ Goodbye ~ "Goodbye (Hello)"

May 12, 2016 20:36

Title: Goodbye (Hello)
Author: evil_little_dog
Series: 2003/Conqueror of Shaballa
Word Count: 627
Rating: K+
Characters/Pairings: Winry Rockbell(/the Elric brothers)
Summary: She didn’t get a chance to say goodbye.
Warnings:
Disclaimer: Hiromu owns all. I just futz around with her characters.
fma_fic_contest prompt: Goodbye (last prompt ever, sniff sniff sniff ( Read more... )

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evil_little_dog May 14 2016, 23:53:41 UTC
Thanks! No matter which 'verse, I always felt Winry was the strongest character created. She definitely deserved better from CoS, though I felt that way pretty much post-episode 40 from the 2003 anime.

Soooo. I figure she deserved some sort of happiness.

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le_confidant May 13 2016, 19:37:29 UTC
CoS Winry would've mourn the loss. She would've move on. She would've done everything in her power to be happy. You've captured this beautifully. You're one of the fan fiction writers I most look up to. I hope to see more of your writing in FF or AO3.

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evil_little_dog May 14 2016, 23:54:39 UTC
I hope to continue writing for FMA (at least a little! I really want to try getting some of my own stuff out there). And thank you for your very kind words.

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le_confidant May 15 2016, 17:59:48 UTC
Of course! Life moves on. :)

I sure would live to read your original stories. I bet they're be as amazing as what I read from you for the fandom.

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evil_little_dog May 15 2016, 22:24:03 UTC
I would certainly hope so. :D

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raceulfson May 14 2016, 17:35:04 UTC
I always felt so bad for Winry in CoS. I'm glad you had her move on, nice closure!

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evil_little_dog May 14 2016, 23:55:20 UTC
She deserved a lot better. I'm glad you like that I gave her a more hopeful ending.

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m14mouse May 15 2016, 01:22:07 UTC
Awww...Poor Winry. But the ending was so hopeful. Great work.

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evil_little_dog May 15 2016, 01:24:23 UTC
Thank you!

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cornerofmadness May 15 2016, 18:49:17 UTC
Well this is just too sad. But Winry is strong and she will go on.

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evil_little_dog May 15 2016, 22:12:22 UTC
I wanted to do something a little more upbeat/different but it didn't work out that way.

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cornerofmadness May 16 2016, 01:49:42 UTC
I don't think any of us really managed upbeat that well

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evil_little_dog May 17 2016, 01:05:02 UTC
It is a bit difficult.

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