this is your fist life and you don't have a name. you are a feeling, tangled and green. you are chaos shaped like calamity.
this is your first life and they carve out a body. you are a girl in every sense of the word, every short skirt and scraped back hair, every bad idea and drop of blood.
(girls are something other. you will work this out when you peek through bedroom curtains in lost games of hide and seek. you will see flashes of underwear when janice spills her books across the floor. you will see the tops of milky-white thighs when you first read narnia and you will sleep with susan's name on your tongue. girls are something other and you will ache for them more than ache to be one
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RE: fic: a swan songlynzie914May 20 2015, 22:57:07 UTC
oh, i LOVE IT, LOVE IT SO MUCH.
I have like no words because you used them in this beautiful fic and i just-- GUH
HOW DID YOU DO THAT? I LOVE IT SO MUCH. EVERYTHING ABOUT IT. I LOVE THE CONTINUED USE OF THIS IS YOUR FIRST LIFE AND HOW IT TALKS ABOUT SO MANY DIFFERENT THINGS AND SO MANY OF THE SAME THINGS AT THE SAME TIME. AND HOW DAWN WILL LONG FOR GIRLS MORE THAN SHE WILL LONG TO BE ONE. HOW SHE WILL ALWAYS SURVIVE EVEN WHEN NO ONE ELSE DOES. HOW SHE WILL KILL AND IT WILL BE A MERCY KILLING. AND SHE'S HOLDING A PEN IN HER HANDS AND SHE GETS TO WRITE HER OWN HAPPY ENDING NO MONKS IN SIGHT. SHE GETS TO CHOSE.
this is your first life and they carve out a body. you are a girl in every sense of the word, every short skirt and scraped back hair, every bad idea and drop of blood.
(girls are something other. you will work this out when you peek through bedroom curtains in lost games of hide and seek. you will see flashes of underwear when janice spills her books across the floor. you will see the tops of milky-white thighs when you first read narnia and you will sleep with susan's name on your tongue. girls are something other and you will ache for them more than ache to be one ( ... )
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what have you done?!
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE ACTUALLY?
#SOBSFOREVER
I am actually an incoherent mess over this so just don't speak to me, don't touch me, don't look at me for a very long time.
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i hope every awful introspective dawn fic i write will be poured down haters throats
my baby be a monster
<3
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I have like no words because you used them in this beautiful fic and i just-- GUH
HOW DID YOU DO THAT? I LOVE IT SO MUCH. EVERYTHING ABOUT IT. I LOVE THE CONTINUED USE OF THIS IS YOUR FIRST LIFE AND HOW IT TALKS ABOUT SO MANY DIFFERENT THINGS AND SO MANY OF THE SAME THINGS AT THE SAME TIME. AND HOW DAWN WILL LONG FOR GIRLS MORE THAN SHE WILL LONG TO BE ONE. HOW SHE WILL ALWAYS SURVIVE EVEN WHEN NO ONE ELSE DOES. HOW SHE WILL KILL AND IT WILL BE A MERCY KILLING. AND SHE'S HOLDING A PEN IN HER HANDS AND SHE GETS TO WRITE HER OWN HAPPY ENDING NO MONKS IN SIGHT. SHE GETS TO CHOSE.
AND I JUST.
well apparently i had some words but still.
write all the dawn. write all the everything.
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dawn/girls 9ever. dawn/survival 9ever. dawn/M U R D E R 9billionever
dawn is like the ultimate meta-fiction. she write herself into reality - she can write herself out
MY BABYYYYY
i will never run out of dawn-things to say ever
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#woundedcatnoises
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