Comments | flaming_idiot: Here's the Hell Paper I wrote for Parsont, if anyone cares

flaming_idiot

Here's the Hell Paper I wrote for Parsont, if anyone cares

Mar 03, 2006 00:01

( You should have looked in the freezer... then we'd both still be alive. )

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crypticman89945 March 3 2006, 20:21:49 UTC

this is wicked good. im glad i could help. you should seriously think about rewriting that novel from scratch that you mentioned before, youve definitely got a gift

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flaming_idiot March 3 2006, 22:17:27 UTC

Yeah, it's a paper for English. Parsont's my English teacher. The assignment was to write about your journey through hell, so that's what I did.

I know it's really confusing, it was intended to be. That's part of the hellishness. My hell basically is never to be sure of anything. And I just kind of went nuts with it at two in the morning over vacation. The quotes thrown in are song lyrics. So yeah, I know it's really choppy. What it really needs is an ending, and therein lies the problem.

princessleia162 March 4 2006, 01:18:05 UTC

There is some absolutely beautiful imagery here. Wow.

This is an amazing piece of work. Got it?

Good.

xoamelia March 5 2006, 17:53:18 UTC

I love it. It completely blows my hell out of the water.

stalkermidget March 19 2006, 15:41:07 UTC

You there, You're in my Gym Class.

I'm the short kid who keeps getting injured.