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Prompt 2: tomorrow

Feb 23, 2010 14:52

Title: Tomorrow
Author: swordznsorcery
Characters: Horace Goodpseed, Jacob
Summary: On the day that Horace Goodspeed died, he was visited by a man named Jacob.
Spoilers: For episode 3x20.

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greedyslayer February 26 2010, 03:36:32 UTC

Really good, creepy fic.

Very interesting choice to focus on Horace and Jacob. I felt Horace was IC, and Jacob too, with that edge of speculation about what he's about.

swordznsorcery February 26 2010, 20:14:46 UTC

Thank you. I have to confess that I'm still not sure about it, but it's good to hear that they seem in character. :)