The Last Two Men [6/11] - Heroes - Mohinder/Sylar

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Title: The Last Two Men [6/11]
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Word Count: 2567
Rating: R
Warnings: end-of-the-world, character deaths, zombie-vampires.
A/N: Inspired heavily by 'I Am Legend'. Thanks to Babylon_pride for betaing.
Previous parts: One :: Two :: Three :: Four :: Five
Summary: On the 13th of November 2010, the dead began to remain undead. Two years later,

Comments

[ibroketuesday]

Noooo, Bob! D:

Bob stares in frozen alarm. "Maya," he says sternly: ready to tell off a corpse for scaring the hell out of them.

ROFL! OH BOB ♥

I really love Bob.

[feyuca]

WHAT. THOSE MIDDLE MANAGEMENT TYPE PEOPLE EX. BOB NEVER DIE!

Well. He'll live on as the very most specialist first zombie convert of Maya. :D

This was a nice break from the intensity and tension of last chapter (not that this one wasn't...just in a different, reminiscently sad way) I wonder what'll happen to Mohinder in the hellish, more-in-the-future timeline. :) This chapter was amazing but I can't wait for the next! -cheers-

[megmatthews20]

Was it you who said you were freaked out by zombies? Because for being so scared of them you write them WONDERFULLY...(unless that wasn't you...in which case you still write them wonderfully :p)

Yay for Maya and Bob zombies...that is so creepy and so very awesome (and sad)

Poor Bob, worrying about Elle even as he's turning...

The way you re-animated Maya was just the best...it's like every good zombie-reanimation scene from a movie...

Can't wait for the next chapter and possibly seeing Sylar's reaction to Mohinder leaving...

cheers!

[levitatethis]

This chapter is such a great flashback to the beginnings of this virus coming alive. It also provides a greater sense of the guilt that Mohinder feels in the present, with just him and Sylar alive, for what has become of everything. If I recall correctly the last chapter had ended with Mohinder going out on his own instead of helping Sylar board up their place. Reading this chapter Mohinder's motivations become a bit clearer...it's a tremendous weight of guilt that crushes down on his shoulders especially considering he had been trying to do the right thin for Maya. Very much "the road to hell is paved with good intentions".

I like the parallel between Bob's concern for Elle and Mohinder's concern for Maya. No matter what there was a personal connection there so even with her becoming the living dead and all the horror that follows, there's still an emotional bond that Mohinder feels to Maya...a responsibility for doing this to her and to the world.

[perdiccas]

That was so suspenseful, and and and I'm kinda on edge and all hopped up! Great chapter!