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Beautiful World

Nov 11, 2005 00:45

Title: Beautiful World
Author: ComedyKitty
Characters/Pairings: Wash/Zoë
Word Count: 421
Challenge: #8 Love
Rating: Pg-13 (for suggestion I guess)
Spoilers: None. Pre-series
Disclaimer: I own nothing. At all. Its sad, really…
( 'Never said I fell in love with you, pilot.' )

008 (love)

Comments 5

falinemalfoy November 11 2005, 18:06:02 UTC

Very adorable. :)

wilhelmina_d November 11 2005, 22:52:14 UTC

Cute. One quick spelling thing though (pet peeve of mine). It's "your" company, not "you're". You're is a contraction of you and are. Other than that, I like the idea of Zoe ambushing Wash. :D

comedykitty November 12 2005, 02:41:16 UTC

....damn i thought i got it all. wrote this late last night when i was half awake. Thanks for telling me and for the kind words! and she did ambush him. i think its her warrior side. :p

budclare November 12 2005, 20:42:11 UTC

Hee. :)

comedykitty November 12 2005, 21:34:54 UTC

thanks! :)