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Chocobo Down - Fic - Sticky Sweet (Final Fantasy XII)

Sep 04, 2009 13:58

Title: Sticky Sweet
Medium: Fic
Request: Balthier/Ashe, post-game and Ashe escapes her castle again and somehow runs into/meets up with Balthier. Humor preferred.
Fandom(s): Final Fantasy XII
Characters/Pairings: Balthier/Ashe
Rating/Warnings: PG.
Feedback: Yes! Please!
Spoilers: Through end of game.
Word Count: 1131
Summary: Ashe escapes ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

owlmoose September 7 2009, 07:51:21 UTC

A nice fun story. I like lots in this -- the bit at the beginning with Ashe seeing through Larsa, and her reflections on being in the Resistance; the implication that Balthier follows her movements and planned to meet her here; the business with the fruit and Al-Cid and the aborted invitation to visit. You have them interact in a way that is very easy beneath the snark, which is an image of them I like very much. Well done. :)

lassarina September 7 2009, 14:24:28 UTC

Thank you :) I like to think that, post-game, they have a sort of unspoken understanding about these things, so I am glad that that came across.

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