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eleawin in feather_n_snow

De Sang et de Sable - Prologue

Nov 01, 2009 19:10

PROLOGUE

La pièce est plongée dans l’obscurité.

Il ne veut pas ouvrir les yeux.

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vik720 November 2 2009, 09:02:53 UTC

Wow, you posted something new!!! I don't speak French so I'm not able to enjoy this one here, but I have a question if you don't mind... Will you finish translating Grey? It's a magnificent story and it's killing me to know the end, it misses only the last part for so long now... Please, I beg you!

eleawin November 2 2009, 12:40:09 UTC

Hello,
I'm glad you like Grey.
I'm very sorry to have forgotten this fic... I had a lot of things on my mind these last months.

Simply put, when I wrote the french version, I did it in a rush. Fast writing doesn't suit me, really, I'm making too much mistakes. When translating in English, I've became too aware of the plot holes in the french version, so I began to rework it.

In fact, I've became so much aware of the plot holes that I found myself hating the french chapters 6 & 7, which should be rewritten if I actually have the time and the motivation to do so. And in two years, I haven't ^^'

But they are written! Actually, if people are interested enough in getting the end, I can try translating it - even though in my opinion it sucks, but I don't know, maybe it is still better to have an end than no end at all.

Well, sorry again for the delay, the no-reply etc, I'll try to work again on Grey to put the fic at its end.

howan November 2 2009, 12:47:23 UTC

han *_* ... bon, je suis plus fan de Seifer que Squall,j'avoue, et là il est cool !
L'histoire a l'air chouette aussi, mais y a trop de zones d'ombre encore ç_ç
et je comprend pas toujours ce qu'il se passe parce que tu switche entre une narration interne et omnisciente et ça me perturbe XD (genre, j'ai pas compris comment sephy arrive, il se matérialise de rien ? dans un des corps de ceux présents ? le corps de squall ? il est juste dans sa tête ?)
mais sinon au boulot pour la suite !!!

eleawin November 2 2009, 12:53:36 UTC

<3
c'est décousu exprès, j'écris pas chronologiquement, je veux que ça soit confus (masquons l'absence de 'vrai' plot, allez) parce que pour tous les personnages, tous est vrai *trop* confus aussi...

c'est le prologue, donc ce n'est qu'une esquisse des scènes qui seront plus développées dans les chapitres.

thanks for reading darlin' ♥