The Darkness Within 11

[faythbrady]

To be perfectly honest I had thought that I had posted this part. I hadn't and no one had emailed me to let me know that the fic wasn't finished. Duh!!
Anyway, A little explaination is needed I feel at this juncture in the story. I had intended this to be it. the end. But when I wrote this chapter the story felt rushed and the plot forced and very

Comments

[eclectic_imp]

OOO Brilliant! I really love your description of the "escape" there at the end! I've been waiting for the next part of this and I'm really glad you're going to be continuing it. ♥ ♥ ♥

[honorh]

Talk about your inner battles! Sounds like Rose and the Doctor are in for one hell of a ride. More?

[debs7]

Wow. It's all kind of heartbreaking and sweet all at the same time. I feel for the 9th Doctor while also feeling sorry for the 10th Doctor and why do I get the feeling that this isn't going to end happily for anyone.

[maniacalshen]

The Doctor's teasing is amusing!

“Although what they’d get from you, I’m not sure. The ability to accessorise, probably.

XD

“I don’t worship Häagen-Dazs®!” she protested.

“I’ve heard the noises you make with Cookie Dough, Rose, you’re fooling no one.”

Lol. Ooh, and what an ending! Here comes chaos.

[slvrcrystalc]

You've posted more! =D I was starting to worry a bit. Will we get more soon, then?