The Darkness Within 10 b

[faythbrady]

This is part B of  The Darkness Within part 10. It wouldn't fit. Grrrr

“Rose Tyler, you are a sight for sore eyes!” Jack hoisted Rose up by her waist and spun her around before she even had time to register their move from one reality to the next.

Rose squealed as she smelled the wonderful mixture of cologne and pure male that was Captain Jack

Comments

[fishface44]

Hooray! Update! This chapter was great. I love how he comes so close to revealing the truth to Rose. I am amazed at how well you write Nine inhabiting Ten! Thank you!

[ageless_aislynn]

Ooo, so glad to see an update on this one! I can just hardly wait to see how this is all going to work out! (Not well for poor crazy!Nine, I can imagine :( but I'm still on pins and needles to read it anyway! ;) ) This has definitely been one of the most unique voices for a fic that I've ever read: you really can imagine that it's (crazy!)Nine ;) inside of Ten's body and that's quite a feat!

So sorry to hear about your prolonged illness, by the way. Hope things are going better for you these days! ♥!

[a_proclivity]

I love this fic. It's amazing. You're amazing. I hope you feel better soon!

[slvrcrystalc]

Yes! Update! Must-Know-What-Will-Happen!

The voices of the two Doctors is superb. I can hear the distinctive speech of the Ninth doctor while having the tenth doctor's voice.

Very glad for the update. Nothing could make me forget this story!

[sinecure]

I just found this fic tonight, and I just read it all. Whew! It's a fantastic story that I was dreading reaching the end of. And now I have, and I need more, more, more.

You've actually got me slightly disliking Nine, not an easy feat, that. And poor Ten! I'm glad Rose has started noticing things are off right from the start. She's a clever one.

*waits impatiently for more* Hope you feel better soon. :(