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~Observations~ Fic - McShep - PG-13

Dec 02, 2008 01:55

~Observations~

Author: Amanda AKA ( Read more... )

observations, fic, mcshep, pg-13, mcsheplets challenge

Comments 10

tarlanx December 2 2008, 09:21:53 UTC

LOL! Poor lust-love-struck John!

fawkesielady_ed December 2 2008, 13:38:41 UTC

haha, it is sort of a lusty love... or maybe a lovely lust... not sure which :D
Thanks for the comment!

eshtah December 2 2008, 14:19:29 UTC

“Well, that’s it for me. Good night John. Hope you feel better tomorrow.”

Aaaaand of course Rodney is *completely* oblivious! Hee hee!

Nice job!

fawkesielady_ed December 2 2008, 14:50:22 UTC

haha! Of course he is :D
I love pining!John and oblivious!Rodney
Of course, since this was for unspoken and I wanted to prove to myself that I could write a fic under 500 words... I couldn't get it resolved :)

But that's ok, we know they end up together :)

Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it :)

beautybecks December 2 2008, 15:01:21 UTC

Pining!John and Oblivious!Rodney are the best pairing ever! I love this so much! Just... GUH!

fawkesielady_ed December 2 2008, 15:09:42 UTC

Thank you!
I'm glad you like it!

pixiequeen10thk December 2 2008, 16:02:13 UTC

Oh yes, I totally agree with you John! Lovely :)

fawkesielady_ed December 2 2008, 16:05:46 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

caelith December 5 2008, 22:10:18 UTC

Ha! I thought for a second that John had said "cockmate" X)

Loved this. God knows how John managed such restraint with Rodney going down on a beer bottle on the bed next to him lol.

fawkesielady_ed December 5 2008, 23:11:32 UTC

Thank you!

hahaha! John was so wrapped up in his thoughts that the only part of the word he regestered was the part that finished the word he was thinking :) hehe

It'd be so hard to watch Rodney with that bottle... but then that was why he got bottles :D

Glad you liked it!