Comments | eyesxofxcrimson: 1000 Themes - #778 - Homestuck/Invader Zim

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1000 Themes - #778 - Homestuck/Invader Zim - Eridan & Dib

Oct 19, 2011 19:04

Title: Special
Rating: R
Warnings: AU, horror themes, sexual themes
Words: 1587
Series: Homestuck/Invader Zim
Pairings/Characters: Eridan, Dib, Torque, and Zita. Established Eridan♠Vriska.

( It wasn't the best parting, and he found room to blame himself for it. )

s: invader zim, *challenge: 1000 themes, c: eridan ampora, c: zita, c: dib, rating: r, s: homestuck, w: 1501-1600, c: torque smacky

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alright, just gotta meet myself where I left off abacusaddict20 March 8 2012, 23:57:27 UTC

Okay this whole piece of writing is just horrifying, as intended. I remember when you first wrote it there were people that were so amused and surprised at the cross-over but you made it make perfect sense. It's especially amusing considering what's happening in Homestuck right now. I think the thing you did best here was the disgusting descriptions of bodily waste, bodies, and even though I barely remember these characters I can hear their voices when they talk to each other.

The mixture between arousal and body horror in this fic is what makes it so physically repulsing to read (and I mean that of course in the best way, not in the it sucks way, duh). I still want to know what will happen next. What in the world is Eridan planning?

In any case, this is really good. I have very few complaints and they're all related to tiny grammar/sentence structure mistakes. I'm guessing you won't write a conclusion or a next chapter or whatever but if you do I will jump all over it.