Chapter 47
"Honesty"
a/n: I'm sorry for the long wait for this update. I had little to no motivation / always feeling too tired or sad to write. I'm very happy I ended up finishing this one though! The free form poem in the beginning is personal in itself. I added it because I thought it was a nice personal touch c': Anyways, have a cool day!
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P.s. I feel like a time skip would be nice like a couple of months to see how they change and whatnot. (does that make sense??)
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to answer your question, i think that some amount of space is a good idea, however if it goes on too long I feel like they might be broken forever so I'm worried! Maybe a few months to a year. But it depends on where you intend to take the story. I hope you take your own advice in writing this story for yourself rather than where the readers want it to go, as the author I feel you have the best judgement.
Thanks again for the update~
Also! I really loved the poem at the beginning, it really hit me. You can really feel the selflessness and hopelessness in the relationship.
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I guess a time skip would be okay like after a couple of months of alone time for both sides we'll be able to see how they've grown/move on (((or not)))
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