Like Night and Day 47

Jul 19, 2016 00:09

Chapter 47
"Honesty"

a/n: I'm sorry for the long wait for this update. I had little to no motivation / always feeling too tired or sad to write. I'm very happy I ended up finishing this one though! The free form poem in the beginning is personal in itself. I added it because I thought it was a nice personal touch c': Anyways, have a cool day!
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chaanie July 19 2016, 07:41:28 UTC
I love this so much ;-;
P.s. I feel like a time skip would be nice like a couple of months to see how they change and whatnot. (does that make sense??)

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jungwhee July 19 2016, 08:22:31 UTC
Ah this hit me like a ton of bricks... this constant push and pull between the two hurts me bad. I never loved you... Oh, baekhyun. Well I suppose they are young too... sdfghj i'm just really sad right now ;-; I hope they haven't gone too far off the edge. But thanks so much for the update, it means a lot that you took your time to write this out despite your physical condition.

to answer your question, i think that some amount of space is a good idea, however if it goes on too long I feel like they might be broken forever so I'm worried! Maybe a few months to a year. But it depends on where you intend to take the story. I hope you take your own advice in writing this story for yourself rather than where the readers want it to go, as the author I feel you have the best judgement.
Thanks again for the update~

Also! I really loved the poem at the beginning, it really hit me. You can really feel the selflessness and hopelessness in the relationship.

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sammylovesblue July 19 2016, 15:57:11 UTC
Too sad to make a comment :-----(

I guess a time skip would be okay like after a couple of months of alone time for both sides we'll be able to see how they've grown/move on (((or not)))

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eunseokkim July 19 2016, 22:47:26 UTC
For me, 2 years maximum as a time skip because I know it's hard to, like move one and all that. Personally by experience, it's been like 5 years and I still haven't move one but that's how life is. I think time skip is a good idea and for it to be years is good because for me, that means that you really loved them. But eh, do what you wanna do. Good luck and I hope it helped~

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rd19 July 20 2016, 05:25:26 UTC
Hi there! I've been a silent reader up until now mostly because I forgot I even had a lj until recently but now that I've found it I can finally comment on your wonderful stories! I've actually been reading your work since there were a few chapters written of The Letter way back when you were on AFF originally ( ... )

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