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everlind

FicAlert! PoT> Locks (Silver Pair) PG-13

Feb 14, 2012 11:38

Title: Locks

Writer: Everlind

Wordcount: 4550

Pairing: Silver Pair

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: none.

Summary: Some things you may never understand until you think to look for them.

Disclaimer: The Prince of Tennis belongs to Konomi Takeshi. This story is based on characters and the universe of The Prince of Tennis, no money is being made from it.

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fic, silver pair, tenipuri, ohtori/shishido, shishido/ohtori, gift-fic

Comments 42

neooldetokyo February 14 2012, 11:46:32 UTC

*does dance* Just last night I was hoping you'd post a fic today for Choutarou! I'm going to go read it now.

everlind March 6 2012, 19:21:24 UTC

Thank you :)

I didn't originally mean to (as I am supposed to be working on something else =__=), but yeah. Here it is XD

I never learn :p

tylashke February 14 2012, 11:54:55 UTC

Yay for fic! ^___^ Loved how you broke up Choutarou's thoughts and the narrative and how you described him stealing touches and fearing unrequited love. The angst was good though I wish you wouldn't have done it for Valentine's/Choutarou's birthday though... XD I'm sure they'll get their happy ending!

everlind February 14 2012, 22:36:37 UTC

Thank you for the comment :) I am glad you liked it, sorta. Sorry it was too angsty; a miscalculation on my part given the occasion. Hn. Well, let's put it like this: I wanted to to show love isn't always gentle and forgiving -no matter what the circumstances or occasion. Not to mention I've written so much sappy/happy Silver Pair of late and people seemed to get kinda fed up? And other stuff *motions vaguely*

BUT! To make up for my transgression, have some happy!Silver Pair on Valentine's day drabble-age :3

***This must be his worst idea ever ( ... )

tylashke February 15 2012, 07:04:12 UTC

That point on love is totally true though and I hope I didn't sound like I was blaming you for posting angst or anything. Also, you didn't need to write the drabble to make up for it, but thank you for writing it! <3

Was very amused by the way you described them being two teenaged boys trapped by Valentine's pink lovey-dovey stuff in the restaurant, and how they managed to enjoy themselves after that. ^^

everlind March 6 2012, 19:23:59 UTC

OH, hey no worries ^___^ Just trying to smooth over my angst-parade for a supposedly 'happy' holiday (or whatever V-day is supposed to be XD). And I had an idea, so it was easy to get out :3 Hope you liked it.

Shishido doesn't think these thing through, the doofus.

neooldetokyo February 14 2012, 11:59:31 UTC

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh

*flails*

that was GOOOOOOOD.

(you know, you could totally continue - hint hint)

everlind March 6 2012, 19:25:27 UTC

I could, true that. I NEED A TIMETURNER FIRST. I shouldn't even be writing this XD

But I just can't ignore Choutarou's B-day *is lamer than Shishido ever will be*

amyused February 14 2012, 15:07:07 UTC

Whenever I finish reading a fic of yours, I feel completely unable to respond in a comment with anything remotely intelligent or profound to say because you steal all my brain power and leave me with just pure, emotional mush.

Don't ever stop. <3

neooldetokyo February 14 2012, 16:30:43 UTC

THIIIIIIIIIIIIIS

tylashke February 15 2012, 07:05:04 UTC

/agree

everlind March 6 2012, 19:27:18 UTC

*flaps arms*

Oh, but believe me, a comment like this steals all my brain power (such as it is) and leaves me wriggling happily on my chair. Thank you for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it, that always really makes the time spent on it twice as worthwhile.

Thank you ♥

sac527 February 14 2012, 17:23:15 UTC

The first half nearly broke my heart. It was painful. Just so you know. Are you proud of yourself?

(But Happy Ending yay!!!!!) Much much love for Atobe.

Happy Valentine's Day!

Edit: On my second read-through (because this totally deserves rereads), I caught this bit and wanted to let you know how much I adore your writing.

"But his throat seems to be twice the size it ought to be and his lips are dry and painful and his eyes hurt and Shishido-san is there, standing before him"

everlind March 6 2012, 19:30:29 UTC

Heheh. I do my best :3

YESSS The Force was with Atobe in the one. I find it curious how some 'secondary' characters usually demand to be in one of the stories and how well they fit in. Atobe isn't usually my forte, but he wrote himself in this ficlet.

Thank you. Very, very much. Knowing that people enjoyed it really makes the constant nagging worries and second-guessing worth it.

Happy (belated) Valentine's Day!!

sac527 March 6 2012, 20:17:34 UTC

The most glorious torture ever. :DD

Ah, I wouldn't have been able to tell that Atobe wasn't your forte. This line, "But when he stands there [...] utterly unimpressed, he's Ohtori's captain all over again," was concise yet comprehensive. I liked it a lot.

I really do love your silver pair. :)

Belated is the best! Chocolate clearance sales! \o/