FicAlert! PoT> Square Root of Pride (Yagyuu/Niou) NC-17 Pt2

[everlind]

Title: Square Root of Pride
Writer: Everlind
Wordcount: 11 811
Pairing: Yagyuu/Niou (Platinum Pair/D1)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Attempts at algebra (and failing at), bra theft and watermelons.
Summary: Love is like an algebra equation. It may look like nonsense, but is always has one and only one solution.
Disclaimer: The Prince of Tennis belongs to

Comments

[hyakuiro]

AX'A;,C;LMLXK"OMGYOUWROTERIKKAID1!!!! * W *

This was so funny! Niou's antics especially had me amused throughout, but this:
The biggest one is a little cracked and leaks juice.
This made me lol like nobody's business. Niou you poor desperate misguided boy. XDD

And I liked how you changed the font for the text messages. That was cute.

Seriously, you write characters so well; I thoroughly enjoyed the interaction between the team members. Hopefully Marui's metabolism and wits catch up. :P

It was a little weird that they couldn't solve the Math problem though (then again I suck at Math so who am I to say), but perhaps the two of them had so much UST that their mathematical faculties fled? I'm also trying to get my mind around the various '2' and '8' permutations that the two of them got... are they supposed to have some sort of meaning? Because the correct answer obvious does. :P

Anyway, this is three years old, but I think I should dedicate it to you for being awesome:

[everlind]

Boys are mysterious, yet silly creatures :3

Sorry for the chubby Bunta. I had him squishy during 'A Dog's Life' and since I read in one of the pairpuri's (at least I think it was there) that he was 'slightly overweight'... yeah. I had to abuse it.

I admit I executed the Maths thing rather poorly. I just wanted -so badly- to answer to my recipient's prompts that I decided to try.

Quoted from an anon at the exchange (I had to ask myself xp):

In Japanese, the number 2 is said as 'Ni' and the number 8 can be said as 'Hachi' or 'Ya'. It's taking the first two syllables of Niou and Yagyuu that makes it a short hand way to say their pairing name.

... so looking at it like that they might be arguing about who gets to 'top'. 28 being Niou/Yagyuu and 82 being Yagyuu/Niou.

O_____________O SO AWESOME!!! I love how you can obviously tell who's who :p And Niou (who's being Yagyuu) being all silly. GAH. I love this. I am so honored to see more of your work!! *right click save* ♥♥♥

I am glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for commenting!

[hyakuiro]

Yes they totally are. X3

Hey don't beat yourself up over it. I remember your post about a Math problem, and am sorry that we weren't much help too... >_<

Oh heyyyyyy. Thanks for the enlightenment! Now I'm fully appreciating that banter, though my mind is straying into gutter territories about the possibilities of '2882' and '8228'-- mirrors? switching? holographic projections? XDDD

[nerdish]

I don't know why I didn't comment on this before.

Okay, yeah, that's a lie. I tend not to comment on exchanges (god that's so horrible) because I don't know who wrote it. So I always feel a little silly blathering on and on about a fic. But I'm weird. And you and I know that, I'm not sure others would understand/appreciate the weirdness

[everlind]

*jumps on*

I'm okay with your weirdness *pets it* I like your weirdness, so we're good :)

This was honestly a stumble through the dark for me. I consciously picked Niou since his personality is easier for me. What with the crossdressing and attempts at Maths, I thought I was allowed that much slack :p

Naked Yukimura ftw!

I won't ever be happy with this since I _know_ the Maths was screwy and poorly written *shrugs*

Thanks for your kind words, though ♥

[everlind]

GRAAAH YES YES YES!!! I needs to be drawn :) *cheers you on*

After Hyotei (which is the awesomest team in existence), I like Rikkai A LOT. And D1. I wouldn't usually try my hand at them, but it seemed like a challenge. I had crossdressing mixed between my prompts and wanted to try, sorry it was kinda cliché *sheepish*

Niou was fun to write though, in his own way. And it was 'educational' to say at least XD

Thank you so much for your comment ♥

[ms_worplesdon]

Gorgeous. GORGEOUS. If you only knew the shiver of excitement and anticipation that comes with seeing you've posted a new fic.

I can't believe that Niou really thought that watermelons (guess they were 'personal size', huh?) would make good breasts. Oh Niou, you crazy bastard. And the whole thing was just hot and lovely!!!

[blue_panda26]

OH MY FREAKING GENICHIROU
THIS WAS AMAZING~
absolutely LOVED IT <3
ouji-sama and yanagi will always be there to outwit and crush the brains of everyone else~
love love love <3
thank you so much~