Of Blood and Magic, Chapter 9 Part II

Aug 31, 2010 10:37



Part Deux of the latest Chapter under the cut: (just figured out how, novice that I am!)

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fanfiction, hp, of blood and magic, checkmated, r/hr

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lauryne78 August 31 2010, 06:16:18 UTC
Auuugh!!

That was a truly evil *EVIL* cliffhanger!! I am sitting so far forward on the edge of my seat I'm barely still in the chair - I just want her to get *home* before Blaise/Matthew comes back in the room (which I am afraid that he's going to do because something tells me he's lurking in her hallway). I can't stand it - too much tension!!

But, as usual, another expertly executed chapter my dear - can't wait for the next section!!

Best,
-Lauryne78

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evanesco75 August 31 2010, 07:18:25 UTC
I love you! Seriously. Thanks for this comment. :)

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evanesco75 September 1 2010, 11:24:54 UTC
Hi, Sarin! Love the name :)

Thanks so much for your feedback; great to know people are reading! I hope to update relatively soon. I'd like to wrap up this story so I can get stuck into my contribution for the Rhr Big bang.

Sara

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evanesco75 September 2 2010, 12:20:53 UTC
Well, I'm thrilled you're here! I would love to have you and others who enjoyed this story, continue it here. Thanks so much!

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mbastos September 2 2010, 21:23:28 UTC
First I just want to congratulate you. I'm a big fan of your work, ever since I stumbled upon "Second Chance" on Love Unchained. I'm not usually into fanfiction, but I got hooked on that story and searched the internet until I found Checkmated and your other works. Sure, I had to wait until someone approved my access to the Bedchamber, but it was worth the wait.

I'm glad that you decided to continue with Blood Magic, which, by the way, is my favorite. It's the best portrayal of Ron so far, and although I've found Hermione just a little OOC, I love how you you depict their relationship. And this last cliffhanger was just mean, so please, don't leave us hanging :P

Anyway, thanks for sharing your imagination with us and I apologize in advance for my broken english haha.

M. Bastos.

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evanesco75 September 3 2010, 16:33:52 UTC
Hi, and thanks! Your English is great, and I'm happy you're here. Thanks also for your comment about Hermione. I know she is quite different; I'm trying to portray a slightly disillusioned version of her, due to what I've written about her relationship with her parents. Always great to get honest feedback, in any case.

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evanesco75 September 6 2010, 07:04:15 UTC
Perhaps... keep reading!

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