Yours is the first Dany/Jorah pairing I've ever read all the way through, and what an introduction!
I love the way she tries to keep the upper hand, I love the way he tries (with varying amounts of success) to obey, to show her he can be what she needs...
And the end, with her letting him call her by her name again... so sweet.
I love how she keeps command and is demanding. Makes her seem like Dany even as she's giving in to Jorah. And then the reversal of her demands there at the end is perfect.
When you told me you were using those prompts and depicting Dany as the dom, I kind of raised a Lady Mary eyebrow, because eep! That's a fine line to walk after everything Jorah goes through in ADWD. But I trusted you because everything you write is flawless and that plus was so not misplaced.
You always write such an authentic sounding Dany to me, and never more so than here. Her powerful, even a little mad, Targaryen queen side, but then the other side that doesn't want to be obeyed, but loved. The most raw moment to me in all of this, when the balance is finally restored between them again, is when Dany feels the welts and scars on his back and begins to cry, and it's Jorah who comforts her, even though you'd think it's him who's in need of some comfort himself. Guh. It's just so perfect, and so them, and I can only hope GRRM writes half this good a reunion for them. Only he won't, because sexytimes with GRRM are usually more awkwardtimes. BUT WE CAN HOPE.
Wow. That was insanely hot. As mrstater said, it takes a lot of skill and finesse to turn this sort of scenario into something that works and is in character and feels right (not to mention something that is really, really, smoking hot). But you totally pulled that off.
Also, I'm jumping with joy over here over the fact that you used two of my prompts *squee*
I'm glad y'all seem to think it was actually in character, because when I was writing it I was just thinking, "Well, okay, it's just porn, I guess they don't have to act believably all the time." So I was worried about that.
I forgot they were your prompts but GOOD.
(Also are you back now from your vacation thing-y I hope you are)
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I love the way she tries to keep the upper hand, I love the way he tries (with varying amounts of success) to obey, to show her he can be what she needs...
And the end, with her letting him call her by her name again... so sweet.
Thanks for sharing this.
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I love how she keeps command and is demanding. Makes her seem like Dany even as she's giving in to Jorah. And then the reversal of her demands there at the end is perfect.
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You always write such an authentic sounding Dany to me, and never more so than here. Her powerful, even a little mad, Targaryen queen side, but then the other side that doesn't want to be obeyed, but loved. The most raw moment to me in all of this, when the balance is finally restored between them again, is when Dany feels the welts and scars on his back and begins to cry, and it's Jorah who comforts her, even though you'd think it's him who's in need of some comfort himself. Guh. It's just so perfect, and so them, and I can only hope GRRM writes half this good a reunion for them. Only he won't, because sexytimes with GRRM are usually more awkwardtimes. BUT WE CAN HOPE.
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Wow. That was insanely hot.
As mrstater said, it takes a lot of skill and finesse to turn this sort of scenario into something that works and is in character and feels right (not to mention something that is really, really, smoking hot). But you totally pulled that off.
Also, I'm jumping with joy over here over the fact that you used two of my prompts *squee*
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I forgot they were your prompts but GOOD.
(Also are you back now from your vacation thing-y I hope you are)
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Also, yes, I am indeed back from vacation. Sadly. Have to go back to work tomorrow :/
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