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Best Served Cold 1/1

Sep 01, 2010 08:10

Title: Best Served Cold

Author: Rachel

Pairing: Erica/Arizona, some Callie/Erica, Mark/Callie and Callie/Arizona.

Fandom: Grey's Anatomy

Rating - NC-17

Disclaimer: Not mine, will never be mine, though if anyone has a spare Sara Ramirez hanging around, I'll more than gladly take her. I don't own any characters herein, and I will return them (mostly) ( Read more... )

writer:ilovecsr, fanfic:erica/ga character, rating:nc-17, art:fanfiction

Comments 10

mean_manic September 1 2010, 09:16:25 UTC

I think it's one of the best written Erica I've read so far. Besides this sex tape part :P but other than this, it's so much like her.

This is really good. Thanks for sharing :)

ilovecsr September 1 2010, 23:17:01 UTC

Thank you so much! That's a really awesome compliment and I appreciate it so much.

Ah, yes, the sex tape part... well, it felt a little non-Erica to me, too, but since this was the part that the whole piece was designed to build to it had to stay.

Glad you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

allatonceyounme September 1 2010, 10:13:17 UTC

I was really nervous when I started reading this, but after I did I realized it was perfection .

ilovecsr September 1 2010, 23:18:40 UTC

Oh wow. Thank you so much for giving it a chance. I'm so glad you ended up enjoying it :D

allatonceyounme September 9 2010, 00:28:29 UTC

I haven't read a single fic of yours that I haven't liked .

dianeb_047 September 1 2010, 18:57:23 UTC

WOW, that was quite something. "Best Served Cold," indeed! I'm not one hundred percent certain the behavior was in-character for Hahn or Robbins, but I won't discount the possibility for either of them! I can tell you this: It was an enjoyable, satisfying read, and I've ALWAYS been on Erica's side in the whole fiasco between she and Callie.

I had some trouble at first, as your style made me think there were *four* people (Callie, Erica, the blonde, and the Latina), but once I got used to that, I was fine.

Good job!

ilovecsr September 1 2010, 23:34:45 UTC

Thank you!

I knew I was pushing the boundaries of the behavior of the characters, but I really had to try and find a way to get the kink bingo square in there. Arizona is somewhat of an enigma to me anyway; she's not a character I particularly like or know that much about, but when someone hurts you the way Callie hurt her, I think you find sides of yourself that maybe even you didn't know existed.

I know. I'm sorry. I really needed to try and clean it up a little, and I normally would have, but it was 6am, I'd been writing all night and I had a deadline to meet that I'd gotten so close to. I don't really have a genuine excuse. I don't like using characters names all the time, but I'd usually try to be a little less clunky with the descriptors.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this anyway. It took me a while to lose a lot of my sympathy towards Callie, but I got here in the end. I never thought Erica was to blame at all, but I did feel some sorrow for Callie for a while.

Thanks :)

dianeb_047 September 2 2010, 15:08:53 UTC

Oh, right, the kink bingo! Stupid me, I entirely forgot the challenge. Geez. Sorry. Forget that part about not being in character.

I never had any sympathy for Callie during that whole mess. I mean, she pretty much chased Erica down, and then when Erica confessed her deepest secret, Callie ran. Nevermind all the crap about Denny. Yikes, I'd better not get m'self started again. I think you know what I mean.

Still remains a good story! :)

wallsurrender September 2 2010, 00:52:47 UTC

I love this piece. the characters were caught perfect...I loved the Bailey and Erica conversation partly because I love Bailey and you displayed her voice so true to character.

Rebound relationships...wow is all I have to say...the anger radiates off the page in vivid detail and never in my wildest dreams would I have put Erica and Arizona together.

Seeing the parings you had posted I almost didn't read it because of the Erica/Arizona notation but because it was written by you I knew I couldn't pass it up. You definitely deserve a round of applause for this piece...another masterpiece to add to the many. ;)

ilovecsr September 12 2010, 04:01:46 UTC

Well, I suck at the responses at the moment. I'm sorry, I do really appreciate it.

Thank you. I love hearing that I captured the characters, since practice doing that is the real reason I do this.

I'm really glad that the anger came through so well. I wasn't sure that it had, so it's really awesome to hear that.

I get that. I think that a lot of people would feel the same way about the pairings, and I'm just amazed that you read it for that reason. Thank you so much, it really does mean a lot to me.

Thank you!