Jealousy - One Shot

Sep 21, 2008 14:13



Title: Jealousy
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dcu_freeforall, one-shot, fanfic, bruce/wally

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jacklemmon September 21 2008, 15:20:59 UTC
Fuuuuuuuun!!

It was a little bit unnerving to be loomed over like that by some kind of deranged shadow.
I love that line. Deranged shadow is sooo the Goddamn Batman.

“Wally.” He loved the way his name sounded when spoken in the dark low tone.
As do I, Wally. As do I.

I loved the fair analogy.

Thank you for sharing! :D

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enchanted_raven September 22 2008, 16:50:49 UTC
Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Heh. There is only so much yelling the Goddamn Batman can take. Even from someone as cute as Wally. <3

I personally don't think there are many ways that can match the hotness of having Batman growl your name.

It just seemed fitting for me to compare a kiss to motion, for a speedster anyway haha.

Your welcome and thanks for reviewing. <3

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Oh, yes! Brally! astrea9562 September 21 2008, 19:28:26 UTC
LOL! Yep, they have a name. *headdesk*

This was so much fun. Lighthearted and intense at the same time. I loved Wally and Bruce in this. Great read.

;D

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Re: Oh, yes! Brally! enchanted_raven September 22 2008, 16:53:07 UTC
Brally haha. I haven't actually heard that one before mainly because everyone always calls it Batflash. Reminds me of an umbrella for some reason..haha. xD

Thanks very much. It's hard to get the balance between Bruce's intensity and Wally's infectious enthusiasm for everything. :)

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si_zilla October 1 2008, 04:33:36 UTC
Very good story.

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