Bit My Heart In Two, part two

Apr 20, 2012 00:01

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To spare my f-list once more )

big bang, fanfic

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anathebutterfly April 20 2012, 00:17:53 UTC
This is really good, Em! First, props to finishing a big bang in general because those are tough. Second, you are just really good at character stuff. I can feel their pain and how these journeys made them who they are. While Critic and Chick were on a similar journeys, they were different too and you showed how they are indeed very different people awesomely. Another thing you are really good at: the Nostaglia Duo in general. Your stuff is in large part what got me into the fanfic part of this fandom and I still love it even though I have left. Sorry for not letting you know as much as I should. Third, the end made me coo (because oh my babies) and smile (because that is so them) simultaneously.

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achika_chan April 20 2012, 02:19:11 UTC
:D This fic was really great. And I don't know why but I think one of my favorite bits is Chick's mom nagging her about the pigtails, and Chick's response. And also Critic's failed date with Vanessa. Well done!

Also, I made a post about the art I did HERE because I had a lot more to say about it than I thought I did!

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jandian April 20 2012, 15:30:57 UTC
I really love the whole 'slice-of-life' feeling I get from this. All the events you describe that ultimately made the Critic and the Chick what they are.
It's amazing how you build up their characters just with that.
So yeah I really liked it :D (Especially the ending)

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obnoxiousamy April 21 2012, 12:31:18 UTC
Argh. This broke my heart. I liked how you built up the parallels between Chick and Critic, eventually culminating in heartbreaking deduction that they just can't be apart and yet they're not that better together.

I don't know why, but my favourite parts were Chick threatening Lupa, Chick watching gay porn at her parents just to spite them and oddly, Critic's awful prom night. Ouch. Heart succesfully broken. D:

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anonymous April 21 2012, 15:30:29 UTC
Hello! Annette here, from TV Tropes. Big fan of the hooker!verse. I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this very much (part two, I think, more than part one. date rape, child abuse and a thirteen year old being molested by her uncle tends to make me nervous) and I'd totally rec this on TV Tropes if it weren't for the new rules. :)

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