How Could There be No Repercussions? Jeff/Annie

[em1983]

How Could There be No Repercussions?

"Men are monsters who crave young flesh!"
    Annie almost thinks she hasn't heard him right. Or maybe he's lost too much blood and doesn't know what he's saying. He couldn't possibly be talking about her, could he? And their kiss? That beautiful kiss that she hasn't stopped thinking about in 3 months?
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Comments

[wallows]

I love this. The voices are great, and even if they're arguing about something that could turn angsty, it's sill kinda funny. It's got that community vibe to it. And ooh that whole daddy business was just deliciously naughty.

[em1983]

It was so hard to keep it not too angsty, but angsty! I was worried about the voices a lot, so thanks for the reassurance!

[blond_bear]

I absolutely love this. I had pretty much the same problems with the premiere and how they dealt with everything (and my issues with how they're generally dealing with Annie stretch farther than that) so I love the way you've worked/re-worked everything here. Your characterizations are spot on and it just made my heart ache for Annie.

So many fantastic lines throughout this but the one about Jeff not noticing that she actually turned 20 may be my favourite. And how much do I love the idea of Annie dating an older guy? That needs to happen stat.

I really hope you continue this somehow...I'm afraid I don't have specific suggestions but the idea of angry/jealousJeff and angryAnnie has so much potential!

[em1983]

I really didn't like the Annie character butchering they did in the premier - she was acting so unlike herself. And then the way Jeff acted like she was an annoying pest was unpleasant to watch.

[fangirl_101]

This was amazing and wonderful and angsty and all sorts of other positive things!! I love Jeff's argument for why they can't be together, it's logical and heartbreaking and infuriating. And admitting that he does in fact like her *melts*. I needed this fic to exist for so many reasons. THANK YOU!!!

[crazyqa215]

Awesome! This was a great read. This is how it should have happened. And the angry!Jeff part's are hot. lol. (I would love to see lots more of this!)

[lunamystik]

Wow, my emotions are all over the place here - and I mean that as a compliment! I'm right there with Annie with her frustrations and anger and longing towards Jeff, but I'm also right there with him re. the "find a nice man" speech.