WIP (finished, actually, unless anyone has concrit): Xxxholic gen-fic

[ekaterin24]

So okay, here's my final edit of my third Xxxholic story. I've been intensely interested in what Doumeki's childhood was like with his grandfather and all. And I like Doumeki Haruka as a character as well. Result

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[keelieinblack]

Oh, this is charming! I love the idea of little!Doumeki chasing off the cat, and asking so bluntly for treats even at such an early age. :D And Yuuko and Haruka do seem like they'd get along quite well.

[ekaterin24]

That's our Doumeki! I had such fun writing him as a five-year-old.

I was aiming for charming and fun, and I'm glad I hit it.