Comments | edmund_caspian: Fic: All Because of His Repost.

timour in edmund_caspian

Fic: All Because of His Repost.

Jan 07, 2011 23:26

Having got some wonderful responses to this, and some very useful feedback I decided to give it another go ( Read more... )

author: timour, rating: explicit, pov: edmund

Comments 7

ineptshieldmaid January 8 2011, 10:30:20 UTC

:D You fixed up the tenses! You've got to watch out for tenses, they try to squirm around when you're not watching them.

timour January 8 2011, 14:04:00 UTC

Tenses and I don't like each other.

Glad I managed to fix them x

ineptshieldmaid January 8 2011, 14:06:07 UTC

Tenses don't like anyone. You should see the insides of Trojie's fic and mine while we're working on them - tenses tenses all over the place.

And then there's the fact that I try to write all sex scenes entirely in -ing forms, and have to go back over and turn them into simple verbs in the editing stage. VERBS. WHY SO DIFFICULT?

noapologyapathy January 9 2011, 07:41:06 UTC

Oh very nicely fixed up! :) (Can't lie, I giggled at the word buttocks. I'm such a little school girl). The ending is done well and overall I think you did a good job editing it.

timour January 9 2011, 09:05:01 UTC

Thanks. Glad you thought it worked as it was your comments that kick started me into doing it.

I giggled a bottocks while writing it but I giggled more with bottom so...

noapologyapathy January 10 2011, 06:27:10 UTC

I'm glad I was helpful then :)

And I understand, it's so difficult to write about someone's butt....

voiceinahead February 12 2011, 13:42:33 UTC

Whoa, amazing... Throughout the movies there's just something about Edmund's eyes that makes every fangirl see he's thinking something nice and perwy about Caspian. It's something about the way he fixes his stare to him and won't stop. So intense. Thanks for sharing!