[Side-story] Revenge Is Sticky

Dec 02, 2011 00:37

Title: Revenge Is Sticky
Author: b_sim
Characters/Pairings: Hyde (Hideto)
Rating: R
Genre: AU, gore
Summary: What does humiliation, pain and suffering built up over the years feel like in one blow? Hideto makes sure his bully knows.
Notes: A side-story to Thin Line, Hideto-centric.
Disclaimer: I do not own Hyde.

Revenge Is Sticky )

fandom: j-rock, rating: r, one-shot, side-story: thin line, genre: gore, char: hyde, genre: au

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tamaaki_kaer1 December 1 2011, 19:18:10 UTC
This story reminds me of hyde's own past. He said he was bullied when he was young because he was being a good, cute kid. Kinda like this story.

Bullying pretty boy just because he appears fragile and pretty was a pretty common syndrome in boys. The bullies either find the victim disgusting or was attracted to the victim but in denial. I wonder if the men bullied hyde in this story just because they were attracted with him but in denial, what a pity..

Plus, is it worth it to torture and kill them? I mean, yes they bullied hyde, but they never tortured him sadistically, like what hyde's revenge was. I Imagine at least one of them felt attracted to hyde but in denial, then bullied him, then being tortured like that by hyde as revenge, aww...

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b_sim December 2 2011, 14:16:08 UTC
Plus, is it worth it to torture and kill them?

Lol, I asked myself the exact same reason when I writing this. I was wondering if Hideto was taking things too far but, then again, he is borderline insane. And, through all the training and humiliation he's gone through, I think he's developed a very, very powerful hate for those bullies and a very strong killer instinct that wants to destroy anything that's ever caused him hurt.

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eadwine63 December 2 2011, 10:57:31 UTC
I am so ... mentally damaged to really LIKE/ADORE such fics... xD I actually never read them, so I'm kinda happy you wrote them? xD

Oh Hideto... You're so disturbed. *loving sigh* ahhahahaha xD

I think I even could have done with MORE details. I am so sick. xD

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b_sim December 2 2011, 14:22:21 UTC
*high-fives* I love reading/writing fics like these too! I'm glad you enjoy them, since not a lot of people seem to, lol.

LOL, you're twisted! If you like this, you should try reading Murakami Ryu's Piercing. I swear, that book is the goriest thing I've ever read. I even felt like puking at some parts.

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dohai_love December 3 2011, 03:40:48 UTC
DUUUUUUUUDE. SO AWESOME. I CAN'T EVEN. I loved it, srsly. That is what I call revenge. Though, I thought maybe he would chop the kid's dong off instead of stabbing a testicle, as punishment for the molestation. For whatever reason, I'm amused by how sick and screwed up Hideto is. XD He's just so righteous. <333 Maybe a bit too righteous though. ^^;;

Also, question- after Hyde cut him open, wouldn't he die after few minutes from blood loss? :O Like while Hyde is cutting out all his organs?

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b_sim December 5 2011, 12:34:07 UTC
*high-fives* This is one of my favourite written pieces because of the gore. Partly because of the writing too, but mostly because the gore. I love border-line-insane Hideto to itty bitty pieces too! ♥

Righteous? Lol, I don't get you.

I have no idea, ahaha. I didn't think about that. I only know a person can survive without the organs mentioned. So, I guess, if Hideto was pretty careful, Masakuza would still be alive. :B

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dohai_love December 5 2011, 22:45:32 UTC
GORE FTW. >D Yeah, it was srsly great, loved every bit of it!! <33 I missed Hideto :'D

I mean righteous as in giving those punks what they deserved for torturing him his entire childhood. It wasn't like it was mindless slaughter, he did what he did to them for a perfectly good legit reason. Although, I'm sure cutting people to pieces isn't seen as "morally justifiable" lol, but I couldn't think of another word. XD

Yeah, I remember looking that up on Google once out of curiosity. :3 Well, I suppose if he made like one simple cut so that the kid wasn't bleeding all over the place, he would be alive for awhile. Srsly, what a way to go. *shudders at thought*

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b_sim December 7 2011, 12:44:26 UTC
I missed him too. If there're any more sidestories to Thin Line, I think they'll mostly be Hideto-centric. Not that I don't love Gackt, but this ninja-verse was srsly MADE for this insane Hideto. :P

LOL. Hideto's a good guy, deep, deep, deeeeeeeeeeep down inside. He doesn't kill without reason. He may be sick and twisted but he's definitely much more human than most people. In a way, he's as innocent as Haido from Scattered Petals. He's just slightly more intelligent. ♥

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a_deux_vitesses December 7 2011, 02:43:32 UTC
Belle, I missed your writing and a side-story to Thin Line was great to see~

I feel so bad for all that Hideto had to endure, and it's sad to know that things like this happen in real life all the time :( Those bullies got was was coming to them. And despite me not being able to take gore very well sometimes, I do enjoy reading it, well done :)

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b_sim December 7 2011, 12:46:54 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have to admit that I'm also slightly proud of this one-shot. I just loved the way it came out. ♥

Ikr? I actually stole the idea for his bullies' antics from a real report about a bullying case in Japan. It's really kind of sad. I never thought bullying could get so bad...

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dohai_love December 8 2011, 18:37:43 UTC
Sorry to butt in, but yeah it can. There have been lots of teenagers as young as 13 here, boys as well as girls, who have hung themselves over bullying. ^^;;

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love_teddies December 13 2011, 09:52:32 UTC
oh my oh my. this is good, evil hyde is good. it contrast with his name MUAHAHAHA

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