Comments | druis: Improving the Truth - Part 2

druis

Improving the Truth - Part 2 - David/Jack

Jan 21, 2008 13:56

Continued from Part 1 - http://druis.livejournal.com/2463.html#cutid1

When they started getting dirty looks from the waiters they split the check and left, hopping a trolley to Queens and the Jacobs apartment. After a flurry of hugs and handshakes, a slightly-awkward kiss ( Read more... )

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thinklast September 10 2008, 20:35:06 UTC

I saw this over at the NewsboyxNewsboy community--I really enjoyed reading this. :)

dinahqueen November 26 2008, 17:51:12 UTC

Found this through the NewsboyxNewsboy comm... great work. :)

cassandra_leeds August 7 2009, 06:03:53 UTC

So glad you posted this at NewsboyxNewsboy and I got to stumble across it! Really wonderful characterization, lovely plot, dialogue was spot on, and the sex was really well done. interested in reading more of your work! This story has really excited me about the Newsies fandom. A truely enjoyable read.

druis August 7 2009, 19:44:19 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.