fic: Pentimento - Jonathan Groff/Zachary Quinto - NC17/RPF

[drinkingstars]

Zach shifts from foot to foot in the farmer’s market stall, intently scrutinizing heirloom tomatoes and late summer squash.

“You like eggplant right?” He doesn’t look up, grazes a finger along glossy dark purple skin.

“How long have we been dating?” Jon laughs under his breath, slipping behind Zach to get out of the way of a woman handling the

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[drinkingstars]

thank you for being my preview reader and giving me helpful feedback. you were so right on with your suggestions, obvs! ♥

[boweryd]

“I think boyfriend is still ok. But, by now, I believe Our People would call us partners.” Jon grabs for Zach’s glass of wine.

“Oh that’s absolutely disgusting, no.” Zach scoffs, watching him intently as Jon finishes that glass too.

“Well you’re not calling me your lover,” Jon laughs with finality, handing the glass back. Zach sets it aside, makes a face like he’s mulling that one over. “No!”

Okay so the sex was crazy hot (like, crazy hot), but I think this was my favorite bit because it just felt so lived-in couply. (The whole fic did, really, but that conversation and the farmer's market were glorious couple type highlights for me. *___*)

[drinkingstars]

thank you bb thank you yay. we share a weakness for couply schmoopy stuff. ♥

[wrongstation]

so i'm a horrible person and never comment fics that often, but holy hell. this is so perfect in ways i can't even explain to you. and your WRITING is phenomenal. so so perfect.

[drinkingstars]

You were my first LJ comment that wasn't from a friend I had harangued into reading this, so I was so excited to get it! Thank you so, so much for leaving it! and for the kind words. it means so much that people enjoyed it. ♥

[miss_begonia]

I LOVE this. So warm and sexy and sweet, and the sensory details are so vivid and specific and great. Beautiful job. I would read 1 million words more of this. :)

[drinkingstars]

this means a lot from you. thank you bb. ♥

[elegantcrimes]

YOU ARE THE BEST.

[drinkingstars]

I CAN"T FIND MY BFP ICON WHAT HAPPENED

Here have these fools ♥