Ficlet.

Jan 02, 2010 20:25

Title: Song for Ten.
Author: drakochi
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who or any related stuff.
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Mostly Donna.
Warnings: SPOILERS for End of Time.
Summary: Donna hears a song unlike any other.
Words: 782
a/n: *hits a plot bunny with a hockey stick* Help me... there are so many of them...

Donnas’ smile vanishes... )

fanfiction

Leave a comment

Comments 25

time_converges January 3 2010, 01:39:36 UTC
Aw, that's really lovely - I'm glad she saw him, even though she forgot again afterward.

Reply

drakochi January 3 2010, 19:22:13 UTC
Thank you.

I hoped that during EoT part 2, Donna would at least glance at Ten but no, nothing, nada!

Reply


katherine_b January 3 2010, 02:27:15 UTC
This is gorgeous, but so bitterly sad! Still, I love it!

Reply

drakochi January 3 2010, 19:25:30 UTC
Thanks!

Yeah, I was aiming for sad. I am glad that it is.

And I wrote the ficlet in present tense! It is harder than it looks... *in wonder* How do you do it?

Reply

katherine_b January 3 2010, 20:35:00 UTC
*lol* Oh, don't worry, you get used to it. I used to have to go through my fics with a fine tooth comb and the search engine to find all of my 'had's and 'were's, but I persevered because I need it to feel natural for my thesis, and now I find myself most comfortable writing in that way.

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

drakochi January 3 2010, 19:29:47 UTC
Thank you for commenting, I am really glad that you liked it.

Reply


misswitch January 3 2010, 03:42:40 UTC
That was both lovely and desperately sad.

Reply

drakochi January 3 2010, 19:30:38 UTC
I was aiming for sad, happy that it turned lovely as well. Thank you for your kind words. :)

Reply


catvampcrazines January 3 2010, 05:16:51 UTC
So shaking and sad, it had me holding my breath. It definitely turned my waterworks back on. Absolutely beautiful. *squishes you* Thank you.

Reply

drakochi January 3 2010, 19:47:05 UTC
Thank you for the comment, I am happy that you liked the ficlet.

*passes a box of kleenex*

Ten's regenaration was lonely and sad. His last words were so perfectly delivered. He should have had someone with him...

Reply


Leave a comment

Up