Andraste's Kiss 5/?
anonymous
July 7 2011, 21:31:08 UTC
It helped, the insistent yank on his hair, the pain of it. Helped him keep his focus, keep him from simply climbing up on Alistair and taking him dry into his body, damn the consequences. Once Alistair came, he'd have a few moments of relative sanity and then they could, could
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Andraste's Kiss 8/?
anonymous
July 13 2011, 21:40:10 UTC
"Zev," moaned Alistair. His breath sobbed in Zevran's ear. "Oh, Maker, oh, Zevran."
"Yes," Zevran hissed. "Like that, oh, like that. You are magnificent, my darling." It occurred to him suddenly that he was taking Alistair's virginity. He jerked, lost control, and took the remainder of Alistair's length in a single quick movement.
Alistair's fingers bit into him bruisingly. They arched silently against one another. Neither of them came. The Kiss had them fully in its grasp now. Zevran remembered the red blur that had descended on him, the way that everyone's face has swum in his vision, mocking smiles, cruelty. But this was now, and this was Alistair, kind and lovely Alistair who did not even know how to be cruel. His features in the half-light were only open and trusting and shocked with pleasure.
They moved. Whispers and groans. Alistair's broken voice calling out blasphemies and endearments. His own smooth tones rough with abandon. Caro, he said, and amore, and mi tesoro. Down they went, and further down.
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Re: Andraste's Kiss 8/?
anonymous
July 13 2011, 23:55:21 UTC
You have no idea how happy it makes me to see this update. I love the endearments, like, it's not just a fuck for Zevran. Like the situation has opened up something for him emotionally as well. I'm now dying to see the morning after.
Re: Andraste's Kiss 8/?
anonymous
July 14 2011, 02:42:09 UTC
And the Antivan. Granted my Spanish is muy rusty, but: Caro, he said, and amore, and mi tesoro Darling, love and my treasure. That sentence just did it for me.
Re: Andraste's Kiss 8/?
anonymous
July 14 2011, 21:00:06 UTC
Totally agree! The endearments were perfect. Really, I'm amazed. Everyone is in character, and even a bit of character development is thrown in, not to mention a great language. Wow. I so want to see the morning after. And their relationship after. :) And also would be great to know who put them in this situation and why.
Andraste's Kiss 9/?
anonymous
July 15 2011, 21:53:38 UTC
When Zevran awoke again, Alistair had rolled away and was sprawled face down in the filthy sheets, a small, almost polite snore attesting to his slumber. Zevran sat up, stiff enough that even his training could not keep a wince from creasing his brow. He got off the bed, avoiding the shattered lamp, and used a partially-clean corner of the blanket to try and tidy himself. It was a token effort, at best. He was going to reek of sex until he found a bath
( ... )
Re: Andraste's Kiss 9/?
anonymous
July 15 2011, 22:20:07 UTC
Oh, poor Alistair. :( and what a pity, Zevran is trying to protect both himself and Alistair, and Alistair is hurt, 'cause he is... falling in affection? (it's not love, not yet) Please, please let them stay together!
Andraste's Kiss 10/?
anonymous
July 16 2011, 04:12:43 UTC
Zevran lifted both eyebrows. He had no doubt that if he had tried such a stunt, he would have broken every bone in his hand. Alistair, on the other hand, pulled back his fist and shook it absently for a moment before seizing the broken edge of wood and pulling. All the heavy muscles in his back and shoulders bunched and tensed with effort and the board came free with a squeal of tortured wood. Sunlight flooded the room, revealing the absolute mess they'd made of it. Alistair tossed the board across the room
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Andraste's Kiss 11/?
anonymous
July 16 2011, 04:55:45 UTC
Alistair set his foot back a bit and let up pressure on the door slowly. It creaked open a handsbreadth, and Zevran showed himself in the gap, smirking at the press of men cursing and shoving on the other side. A longsword thrust through at him and he stepped up beside it, caught it between his newly acquired daggers, and twisted. It rang as it fell to the floor. Alistair let out a shout, dropped his shoulders, and rammed the door shut again. Some unfortunate did not snatch his fingers back in time and an agonized scream put a grin on Zevran's face
( ... )
Andraste's Kiss 12/?
anonymous
July 16 2011, 04:56:20 UTC
It was the predictable rush of concern from Leliana, Wynne, and Duran, a drunken toast from Oghren, disdain and indifference from Morrigan and Shale. A note had arrived in their absence, it seemed, from supporters of Loghain, telling Eamon to throw his support to the Regent or receive Alistair's head in a box
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"Yes," Zevran hissed. "Like that, oh, like that. You are magnificent, my darling." It occurred to him suddenly that he was taking Alistair's virginity. He jerked, lost control, and took the remainder of Alistair's length in a single quick movement.
Alistair's fingers bit into him bruisingly. They arched silently against one another. Neither of them came. The Kiss had them fully in its grasp now. Zevran remembered the red blur that had descended on him, the way that everyone's face has swum in his vision, mocking smiles, cruelty. But this was now, and this was Alistair, kind and lovely Alistair who did not even know how to be cruel. His features in the half-light were only open and trusting and shocked with pleasure.
They moved. Whispers and groans. Alistair's broken voice calling out blasphemies and endearments. His own smooth tones rough with abandon. Caro, he said, and amore, and mi tesoro. Down they went, and further down. ( ... )
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The endearments were perfect. Really, I'm amazed. Everyone is in character, and even a bit of character development is thrown in, not to mention a great language. Wow.
I so want to see the morning after. And their relationship after. :) And also would be great to know who put them in this situation and why.
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(<3 you so much a!a. So. Much.)
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Please, please let them stay together!
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I am eagerly waiting to see how it all works out.
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Is that ... is that plot in my PWP fill? Filthy, insidious plot! It just gets everywhere, and I can't wash it out no matter what I do.
This ... this might get long, guys. Strap in.
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