Oh, I really like this. ♥ Because seriously, just because Amber might be a bit of a tomboy, and is working that "boyish" concept, does not mean she's actually a guy. I really liked each section with Jonghyun, Victoria, and Key, though the one with Victoria might actually be my favorite.
The time you called her beautiful you didn't expect her to look at you in that way. In that quarter of a second, you felt stripped naked, right down to the buttocks, your breasts free from the spandex, your body allowed to inhabit its natural space again. "Oh, Amber," suddenly she's saying, suddenly big sister mode again; the distance between you rightfully restored. "But so are you." ♥ I love these lines.
For a second he looks shocked, eyes dark and round. You think he's about to apologize, but he says, "Is it so wrong? I just--I like you. Is that so messed up? A boy liking a girl." Oh, Kibum. I love your take on him even if it's only a few lines.
i'm so glad you liked it ; ; i've heard so many varying opinions on amber's image, including those that say they're proud of her for being so true to herself and not taking the girly route... and i guess this is a stab in the dark at the alternative: what if she's not given a choice? ; ;
This is one of the beautiful peices I have read so far, short but it felt like it has enough emotion that of a novel Hope to read more from you int he future~
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The time you called her beautiful you didn't expect her to look at you in that way. In that quarter of a second, you felt stripped naked, right down to the buttocks, your breasts free from the spandex, your body allowed to inhabit its natural space again.
"Oh, Amber," suddenly she's saying, suddenly big sister mode again; the distance between you rightfully restored. "But so are you."
♥ I love these lines.
For a second he looks shocked, eyes dark and round. You think he's about to apologize, but he says, "Is it so wrong? I just--I like you. Is that so messed up? A boy liking a girl."
Oh, Kibum. I love your take on him even if it's only a few lines.
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thank you a lot ♥!
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Hope to read more from you int he future~
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thanks a lot ♥ :)
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