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Apr 06, 2010 01:17

seventeen
mostly amber (+jonghyun, victoria, key)
pg
this is a job. you're paid to confuse.

You're not confused. )

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scylladakylla April 6 2010, 05:46:34 UTC
Oh, I really like this. ♥ Because seriously, just because Amber might be a bit of a tomboy, and is working that "boyish" concept, does not mean she's actually a guy. I really liked each section with Jonghyun, Victoria, and Key, though the one with Victoria might actually be my favorite.

The time you called her beautiful you didn't expect her to look at you in that way. In that quarter of a second, you felt stripped naked, right down to the buttocks, your breasts free from the spandex, your body allowed to inhabit its natural space again.
"Oh, Amber," suddenly she's saying, suddenly big sister mode again; the distance between you rightfully restored. "But so are you."
♥ I love these lines.

For a second he looks shocked, eyes dark and round. You think he's about to apologize, but he says, "Is it so wrong? I just--I like you. Is that so messed up? A boy liking a girl."
Oh, Kibum. I love your take on him even if it's only a few lines.

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downroad April 6 2010, 14:59:55 UTC
i'm so glad you liked it ; ; i've heard so many varying opinions on amber's image, including those that say they're proud of her for being so true to herself and not taking the girly route... and i guess this is a stab in the dark at the alternative: what if she's not given a choice? ; ;

thank you a lot ♥!

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ladyburara April 6 2010, 07:05:33 UTC
This is one of the beautiful peices I have read so far, short but it felt like it has enough emotion that of a novel
Hope to read more from you int he future~

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downroad April 6 2010, 15:03:43 UTC
thank you so much! :) that is one of the sweetest things anyone has ever said to me ♥

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downroad April 6 2010, 15:04:47 UTC
now there's a reaction i didn't expect!! \o/

thanks a lot ♥ :)

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faded_citylites April 6 2010, 07:54:08 UTC
haha. don't have much to say, but i really liked this. ♥

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downroad April 6 2010, 15:05:54 UTC
it means a lot that you took the time to let me know, despite not having much to say ; ; ♥ thanks a lot :)

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align April 6 2010, 09:47:43 UTC
This is so very, very, very awesome. ♥ I loved the last two paragraphs so much. *adds to memories*

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downroad April 6 2010, 15:10:03 UTC
omo ; ; i'm so glad you liked it! and oh dear, thanks for the mem ; ; ♥

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