Downton Abbey Comment Ficathon

Sep 26, 2011 12:29

With the new season upon us, and fandom all extra-enthusiastic, I figured now would be a great time for this. Because there can never be enough Downton Abbey fic, and there certainly isn't enough now!


Read more... )

comment ficathon

Leave a comment

Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 1) xx_pinkstar September 28 2011, 01:28:35 UTC
Oh my God, I sincerely apologize for both the length and quality of this fic, this is why I don't let myself write, I cannot stop myself.

Playing Favourites

Sybil is born on a sunny day in the height of August when even the consistently gray England is engulfed in heat and the slightest breeze is seen as sweet relief. This is quite the opposite to both Mary and Edith who were brought into the world during icy days in December and February respectively.

When Mary thinks she is terribly grown up although not many people would agree, somebody makes a joke at the dinner table about how there must be a correlation in Mary and Edith's frosty dispositions as compared to Sybil's constant sunny temperament, apparently there is something incredibly witty about this comment as a laugh resounds around the table. Mary does not find this amusing in the slightest.

Nobody could accuse Edith of being a cheerful child, but she has been assured by many people that she is a charming young lady. Unfortunately her furrowed brow and slightly ( ... )

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 2) xx_pinkstar September 28 2011, 01:30:30 UTC
"Well...no. I suppose I don't, not really. But she is most tiresome and she dropped Sybil in the lake." Carson raises his eyebrow marginally, slightly confused by the newest factor of the conversation

"...Sybil, my lady?" he gently presses. This time it's Mary who lets out an exasperated sigh as though it were the most obvious thing in the world.

"My dolly Carson, my favourite dolly, with the blue eyes." She looks at him imploringly, "a brother wouldn't have done that, they don't like dolly's you know." Carson finally lets out a small chuckle which makes Mary feel ever so slightly better.

"No, perhaps boys may not like dolls" he leans in conspiratorially closer to her "but can you keep a secret?" Mary nods eagerly, if there is something she likes more than climbing trees, it's secrets. "Boys are far more tiresome than girls are." She gives him a suspicious look but the tears have long since halted, so he continues. "And you know Lady Mary, if it were a boy you wouldn't need to be responsible for him ( ... )

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 3) xx_pinkstar September 28 2011, 01:33:35 UTC
"Oh me next." Edith says as she scrambles away from their Mama and tugs on Papa's leg as everyone in the room chuckles.

"I'm not finished" Mary says amongst Edith's protests, sticking her tongue out at her. Papa eventually reaches a compromise by placing the baby in Cora's arms as both Mary and Edith snuggled up on either side of her and gaze at their newest family member.

"She looks just like my dolly." Mary finally announces, breaking the silence. Her Papa seems to find something amusing in this statement as he lets out a quiet laugh,

"Darling, you have so many dolls I would be shocked if she didn't bear some resemblance to at least one of them."

"Yes, but she looks exactly like Sybil" she says as Carson represses a snort from behind his gloved hand. She throws a glower his way before aiming an even harsher one at Edith "my favourite dolly that Edith dropped in the lake." Her parents both give sounds of remembrance, that is one debacle that won't be forgotten for a good few years. "I hope she has blue eyes." Mary finishes ( ... )

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 4) xx_pinkstar September 28 2011, 01:37:22 UTC
"Oh..oh..please don't be angry Mary" Sybil manages between sobs, "she wanted me to play with my dolls and you know how they bore me so...so...I ran away from her." she finally whimpers out, her sky blue eyes burning into Mary's own dark ones. "Don't be angry Mary." she repeats in a small voice. Mary isn't sure how anyone could be angry with her sister when she gazes at you in such a way.

"Oh I'm not angry with you my darling, although I am very angry with Mrs Grayson, running away or not. Just suppose you had fallen and landed much worse and there was nobody here to help you. Why Papa would have her neck for it, if I didn't get there first." she tells Sybil cradling her in her lap. Sybil lets out a watery giggle ( ... )

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 4) hacash September 28 2011, 08:06:04 UTC
This was fantastic! Loved Mary's protectiveness of Sybil - which we saw a little of after the Ripon incident - and I love the idea of Carson persuading her to look after her little sis :)

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 4) xx_pinkstar September 29 2011, 17:17:59 UTC
Mary/Sybil sistership is basically my OTP tbh so I had to write this, thank you ♥

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 4) dollsome September 29 2011, 15:31:43 UTC
Awwwwwww, this is so lovely! ♥ I love the glimpse of the girls in childhood, and Mary's talk with Carson was SO SWEET AND PERFECT I COULDN'T EVEN HANDLE IT, and the scene with the family all together meeting Sybil was so sweet, and basically my heart is very full right now. :D

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 4) xx_pinkstar September 29 2011, 17:17:07 UTC
Aw thank you, I haven't written for about a year tbh so I'm not really happy with it, but I'm glad you enjoyed ♥

Reply

Re: Mary & Sybil - Playing Favourites (Part 4) broadwayyy October 14 2011, 23:40:31 UTC
This is perfect.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up