Guuuhhhhhhh...you do not ever disappoint! I love Molly's initial resistance (you go, gurl) to Sherlock's feelings for her; she's been played too many times. Ohhh, peeps better come out of this alive!
Of course Molly would resist. She's not stupid! Though, I have a rather cracky idea of POV reversal for the whole 'I have feelings' discussion...were we can see Molly's thoughts.
Heck, I have the idea for Toby's POV in my head...
Anyway, thank you, thank you for still reading this!!!
I have to say I love how you write Mycroft and the Sherlock - Mycroft interactions, they feel very much in character. And I really like how you wrote John. They need more scenes.
I've enjoyed the introspective Sherlock parts in this chapter immensely, and I think the story really needed them. I think it probably needs Molly's perspective as well, so I hope that's coming in future chapters.
Thank you vey much. For some reason, writing the little bit of Mycroft in the two chapters was really fun. And don't get me started on John...there might be a project in the back of my head that involves him more...
As for the POV, I'm afraid I'm trying to keep it all in Sherlock's for the whole story. There is something really fun about writing someone's emotional state when that someone is most of the times either ignoring it or in denial of their feelings.
But, I've had actually written some of the scenes in various chapters with Molly or John's POV and might end up posting them once the whole sorry businness of this is over...
Poor Sherlock, so ganged up on. Of course, if he wasn't such a twit about his emotions, it wouldn't take Jim threatening Molly and then John and Mycroft forcing his hand to get him to admit he loves Molly, would it? :D
This is brilliant! (yes, it's Arthurish, it's also completely accurate)
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I love Molly's initial resistance (you go, gurl) to Sherlock's feelings for her; she's been played too many times. Ohhh, peeps better come out of this alive!
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Though, I have a rather cracky idea of POV reversal for the whole 'I have feelings' discussion...were we can see Molly's thoughts.
Heck, I have the idea for Toby's POV in my head...
Anyway, thank you, thank you for still reading this!!!
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I've enjoyed the introspective Sherlock parts in this chapter immensely, and I think the story really needed them. I think it probably needs Molly's perspective as well, so I hope that's coming in future chapters.
Can't wait for the next one!
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As for the POV, I'm afraid I'm trying to keep it all in Sherlock's for the whole story. There is something really fun about writing someone's emotional state when that someone is most of the times either ignoring it or in denial of their feelings.
But, I've had actually written some of the scenes in various chapters with Molly or John's POV and might end up posting them once the whole sorry businness of this is over...
Thank you for reading and commenting! :D
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And this. This is just -- of course Jim would come and spoil everything. But he's also a great catalyst forcing people to make their moves.
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But he does get people to do things, so he can't be all that bad, can he?
And thank your for sticking with this!!!
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And thank you for reading!!!
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Poor Sherlock, so ganged up on. Of course, if he wasn't such a twit about his emotions, it wouldn't take Jim threatening Molly and then John and Mycroft forcing his hand to get him to admit he loves Molly, would it? :D
This is brilliant! (yes, it's Arthurish, it's also completely accurate)
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