Comments | disalae: Marionette [Heroes]

disalae

Oct 20, 2009 19:59

Title: Marionette
Series: Heroes
Rating: G
Prompt: Toy
A/N: Written for challenge 14 @ sylelle_100

( she never had a doll, but she can't think of anything else she'd rather be )

Comments 16

bellonablack October 22 2009, 20:04:00 UTC

Oh, I loved this one. <3

I like childElle stories and the contrast between the two girls is beautiful.

disalae October 22 2009, 20:13:02 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

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disalae October 24 2009, 16:53:40 UTC

Yeah, sometimes I try happy but it just comes out all sad and I just let it roll. The characters just lend themselves to misery.

Thanks <3

andystar101 October 28 2009, 20:05:29 UTC

Well done. I think you captured her frame of mind well. She was just seeking attention even when she knew it wasn't real.

disalae October 28 2009, 23:26:37 UTC

Thank you so much. I think she was just so starved for any kind of validation, that really ANY kind would do. Glad you enjoyed it!