Heroes50.6: Nathan's Inheritance

Jun 01, 2007 09:54

Title: Nathan's Inheritance
Rating: G
Summary: Claude meets the Great Nathan Petrelli, and explains his family to him.
Notes: For heroes50, prompt 6: Fly. This is the first story of the "Quest" series in The Invisible Cycle (see Table), and is meant to be read as part of a series of interlinked vignettes. Spoilers for the season finale.

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gladdecease June 1 2007, 23:03:47 UTC
Just--AWESOME.

Nothing else to say.

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died_in_odessa June 2 2007, 03:17:16 UTC
Thanks!

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g_shadowslayer June 2 2007, 00:55:06 UTC
This is painful and lovely.

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died_in_odessa June 2 2007, 03:16:59 UTC
Thank you!

Perhaps it will be less painful after the next two parts *knowing look*

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g_shadowslayer June 2 2007, 06:27:29 UTC
Yay! *does happy dance* :D

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gingerberrysnap June 2 2007, 08:52:18 UTC
I'm so glad to see another one of these vignettes. I love that even though there's only six of these so far and there are still big gaps, there is a clear evolution of Claude's character through these different points in his life.

Looking forward to more of the table! :)

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died_in_odessa June 2 2007, 12:00:57 UTC
Thank you! That's nice to hear, of course. I'm going to start some scenes in the future, as well, after this set of five, so that'll be fun. It's interesting to chart how he might have developed over the years...

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lostandalone22 June 2 2007, 11:14:44 UTC
Nice little conversation. It ties things up for both of them. Nice job!

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died_in_odessa June 2 2007, 12:00:07 UTC
Thank you!

Though it's not quite tied yet....*mysterious grin*

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cadence_k June 2 2007, 20:28:54 UTC
Oh, dude. Just break my heart, why don't you? This is so well-written and believable and in all other ways fantastic.

Although I see that you are maybe planning to continue this story line? Awesome. :)

(Also, sorry for spamming you with several comments in one day. I'm trying to be better at leaving feedback and this is the result!)

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died_in_odessa June 4 2007, 12:31:30 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad it had an impact, that's always a goal with writing, isn't it?

I do indeed intend to continue the storyline, and in ways that will make this one significantly less depressing :D

As for spamming, don't worry about it -- I'm happy to have your comments!

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