[one shot] broken
Title: Broken
Author: diamondsofsix
Rating: G
Genre: General
Pairing(s): Subassan
Word count: 665
Warnings: Not betaed
Author's Notes: Written for je_prompts, prompt #29 'lamp'.
( Subaru has a problem with Yasu's lamp )
Author: diamondsofsix
Rating: G
Genre: General
Pairing(s): Subassan
Word count: 665
Warnings: Not betaed
Author's Notes: Written for je_prompts, prompt #29 'lamp'.
( Subaru has a problem with Yasu's lamp )
Comments 5
this really made me smile :)
It has a different mood to it, I noticed, it's somehow happier - yet deep, in a strange and lovely unison. I love the way you write Subaru! He is too lovely, seriously. And I don't know why but somehow, I LOVED the part about the sofa. "-he wandered over to the sofa and flopped down right next to Subaru, even if the sofa was large and white and modern." - I LOVED THAT LINE SO MUCH! :)
and I love all the little details. You've been careful about everything, and it all has a meaning and a story to tell and I really love that. And it makes me curious about those stories!!
Eventually, I want to read more short stories like this one! It made me really happy and left me with a strange tingling feeling~
Yet another lovely story from you! yay! Please please, keep it up!! <3
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Anyway! Yet again; thank you so much for the review!
I had so much fun writing this one, it just kind of flowed down by itself. Subaru was ridiculously easy to write, I think we have one too many things in common, haha XD But all in all, it was fun and I think I'd definitely make more of these ^^
I'll keep it up until the day I die!! <3
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I can't wait for more like this one!
you really should write more Subaru, because you do it SO WELL ♥
ahaha and I saw you was eito-rated as subaru ne, haha ! so i guess you are much the same as him! that's so cool! I posted an entry at eito-ratings last thursday ne, but they still haven't put it up... i wonder why D:
aanyways;
YAY ♥
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