H50 Fic: Essential, Steve/Danny

Aug 17, 2012 13:49

Title: Essential
Rating: PG, lots of h/c
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Wordcount: 250
Summary: Wo Fat’s cattle prod had burned away every molecule of water in his body, and something else, many things. Important things.

Essential )

fic, h50

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embroiderama August 17 2012, 20:55:05 UTC
Oh, wow. This is so sparse and really moving.

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desertport August 17 2012, 21:02:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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bombom_mamasita August 17 2012, 22:43:08 UTC
I think you broke me.

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desertport August 22 2012, 04:20:52 UTC
*fixes you up* Sorry about that. ;) Thank you for the comment!

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mcparrot August 18 2012, 08:31:04 UTC
That was great, but it would have meant much more with proper punctuation.

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desertport August 22 2012, 04:23:30 UTC
As you might have guessed, passing on quote marks was a stylistic choice, one that by its nature is not going to appeal to everyone. Potayto-potahto. Sorry it didn't work for you, but I stand by it. Thanks for the comment.

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finduilas_clln August 18 2012, 13:41:27 UTC
Wow. What an incredible story in so few words. I... wow. I think you broke us all.

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desertport August 22 2012, 04:24:55 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it!

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dotfic August 18 2012, 21:06:42 UTC
Noooooooo. ;___; This is so spare and vivid.

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desertport August 22 2012, 04:25:26 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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