Comments | dayadhvam_triad: Mixed With the Lightning of Slaughter [ch. 11]

dayadhvam_triad

Mixed With the Lightning of Slaughter [ch. 11]

Sep 04, 2008 11:05

( 11 - mere anarchy )

manga: naruto, ship: gen, fic: [n] the lightning of slaughter, fanfic

Comments 11

helike September 4 2008, 15:42:09 UTC

Oh O_O Did he really use Amaterasu? How did he get it here?
Good job :)

dayadhvam_triad September 4 2008, 15:49:02 UTC

Yeah, he did. :) I sort of think of it as--well, gaining Mangekyou depends on the mental state, right? That idea of killing your best friend (or brother, apparently) sort of messes with your emotional/mental state and Sasuke's time-travel carried over that through his memories. So young!Sasuke now has the Mangekyou, but he just sucks at using it. XDD

Thanks, I assume this chapter made sense to you. XD *glomps*

helike September 4 2008, 15:54:01 UTC

Ok, we've already discussed the MS stuff twice XDD Besides, Sasuke's having it in the manga only proves that it's more about the mental state than anything else, because, technically, Sasuke didn't kill Itachi.

Well... Definitely enough sense :P

dayadhvam_triad September 4 2008, 15:57:16 UTC

LOL yeah, I don't think we have to rehash it again. XDD And technically he didn't kill Itachi, yep. Itachi just sort of... croaked. ^^;

XD I'm glad to hear that. :)

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acaida September 4 2008, 21:24:40 UTC

WOOOW. Things are really picking up now. I LOVE IT. Sasuke's confusion and his mixing up with the past and future was really neat. I loved how his current self battled with the one from the future. Really cool.

Have fun at uni~~ Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

dayadhvam_triad September 10 2008, 03:24:10 UTC

I'm very glad you liked it! :DDD I hope that the current self vs. future self situation wasn't too confusing. XD

Thank you, I'm having a great time at uni so far! And also, thank you for commenting! :)

stacylilly September 5 2008, 00:56:13 UTC

I...I love you. Your writing skills are other-worldly. There is no other word for it. You should bottle your talent and sell it. Damn, I would buy a whole case.

One last thing to say: "You. Are. A. Genius!"

Thank you! I will be impatiently awaiting the next enstallment.

dayadhvam_triad September 10 2008, 03:25:00 UTC

*blushes* I'm so happy you like it! Thank you very much for commenting, I appreciate it so much! :D

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dayadhvam_triad September 12 2008, 23:56:20 UTC

Thank you for the b-day wishes! :)

I'm both looking forward to and dreading writing REALLY-messed-up!Sasuke for the next few chapters. XD I just hope people will follow what I'm trying to show about him. ^^; I'm glad you think the present tense works!--I was trying to go for the very in-the-moment feeling, because Sasuke's sense of time is warped in relation to others, so the other scenes are in past tense, but Sasuke's scenes are in present tense. :P

Yeah, the Konoha nin are beginning to get their act together. :DD

Much love for Itachi! <3

Oh good luck with your homework! And thanks, dear. ♥ (LOL I have that problem too XDD;)