Comments | darthbatgirl: fic Baby Mine parts 3 & 4

darthbatgirl

fic Baby Mine parts 3 & 4

Oct 31, 2012 10:36

Title: Baby Mine part 3 & 4
Author: darthbatgirl
Beta: larsinger29
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Characters: Roy/Tim, Steph, Cassandra, Bruce, Jason Blood, Zatanna, Kon-El, Lian, Damian,
Summary: Tim finds a baby in his living room one morning. With Roy's help, Tim discovers that the baby is his and Roy's. This discovery leads Roy and Tim down a ( Read more... )

batfamily, dcu_bigbang, roy/tim

Comments 4

larsinger29 October 31 2012, 20:43:55 UTC

Oh, these two parts are really quite lovely together too! Loved the way you handled the fight between Tim and Roy. It came off as very realistic and understandable. Roy coming around at the end was really excellently handled.

I simply adore the way you write Lian (and Damian). She's got such spunk and vigor, and you can see so much of Roy in her personality. And she makes a great foil to Damian, and their dynamic is just too fun!

Another terrific couple of parts! This is just a really fun story and such a great journey to take with these characters.

darthbatgirl November 11 2012, 21:37:39 UTC

Writing Lian and Damian together was just so much fun. I can so see them together when they get older.

Thank you so much hon.

lunatic_lullaby November 2 2012, 04:03:45 UTC

I'm glad the fight was handled, it's kind of tough when both sides are right. I think Roy's doing pretty well as I would expect most people to freak out and head for the hills if a child who they had no say in the creation of was suddenly presented as 'yay, your new son!' without any clue that there was even a possibility of a baby being on the way. And at the same time there's no way of holding it against Tim that he had a quiet, tender wish in his heart that he didn't think he could share; most people are probably in the same boat, with one wish or another.

Kon is totally going to be the best godfather ever. <3

Jack was never going to get on a sleep cycle if Damian kept “checking up” on him.

Aha! The true hypocritical culprit is caught! XD

Damian is killing me with cute and I love Lian's snark.

darthbatgirl November 11 2012, 21:42:04 UTC

Yeah the poor guys they both had a valid point in all of this. But well true love wins out and all that jazz ya know. And they worked it out in the end.

And two things to remember, Kon is the greatest God father ever and Lian and Damian will take over the world one day. :)