MfWAT: It's Fine Because I Say So

Aug 22, 2008 14:23

Memories from Western Air Temple
Chapter Title: It’s Fine Because I Say So
Characters: Aang, Katara
Arc: Unity Arc
Setting: after Sleeping Arrangements, before A Matter of Observation
Rating: K
Warnings: the usual
Summary: Katara tries to talk sense into Aang, only to end up foiled by the Avatar’s unique way of being sensible on his own.

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fic: memories from western air temple, fanfiction, pairing: zuko/aang, fandom: avatar: the last airbender

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AHAHAHAHA ha .. haha ....ha. iamtheuberlorax August 22 2008, 18:17:07 UTC
“Now, if you don't mind, I was supposed to drag Zuko to go swimming with me.” That was brilliant. I've always love seeing Zukaang stories through Katara's perspective, especially when people write her in character. This was yet another wonderfully thought out and well crafted short. I think one of my favorite lines, (aside from the one at the beginning of this post) has got to be, "More than simply worried, actually. It was severely threatening her mental stability." *sigh* Too true, overprotective!Katara ftw.


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Re: AHAHAHAHA ha .. haha ....ha. darth_animus August 23 2008, 13:45:23 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. I was worried that the story might be forming out to be too anti-Katara when it's not meant to be so. Because of that I gave her a POV chapter, since I really do like Katara.

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pukjie August 23 2008, 00:27:52 UTC
Aww~. Socute.

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darth_animus August 23 2008, 13:45:39 UTC
Thanks. :3

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jill_rg August 23 2008, 23:07:37 UTC
Great job. One of the strongest sources of in-show Zukaang subtext, after all, is how Katara always clashes with Zuko over Aang.

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darth_animus August 24 2008, 13:40:19 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you approve.

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alpha2nd2006 August 24 2008, 15:00:33 UTC
Ah, that was great. You're depiction of Katara's suspiciousness is flawless. The characterization of Aang is very nice too. Really, the Aang from the show would have reasoning like that. The subtleness is great too. Looking forward to your next chapter!

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darth_animus August 24 2008, 17:09:08 UTC
Thank you. It's good to hear that I have succeeded in grasping the character's personas.

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Koneko: anonymous July 3 2010, 08:53:38 UTC
Gosh.
Ur awesome.
(^-^)

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