[Fic] Mercenary challenge

[7maxwell]

In Memories
7maxwell
Dark, Angst....disturbing ^^;
GW does not belong to me...no matter how much I cry ^_^;

Comments

[ex_ederyn860]

Heh heh! I looooove the ending to this!

[7maxwell]

That was probably the hardest part to write ^^; Glad you liked it luv *huggles*

[la_gleep]

All the while reading this fic, my eyes were glued to the screen with a mix of fascination. I'm a bit deadened when it comes to disturbing scenes in fics, so it takes something a bit extra to make my eyes widen in horror these days. But your style of writing, the choice of words, it's all very convincing. It's... clean-cut and direct in a no-nonsence sort of way. The problem with writing fics like this one, with that kind of cruel events, is that it's so easy to lose credibility, just by missing on the wording somewhere, making the reader think "yeah, that's cute". You don't have that problem, however. :)

I was especially touched by the last lines:

[i]I pulled the trigger.

Just like he taught me to.[/i]

Heartbreaking. Unlike fics that are _meant_ to be just that, this really _was_. Oh Trowa... Poor little thing. :(

[7maxwell]

Well I'm no Tsuki when it comes to dark and angsty Trowa ficlets, and to tell the truth I wanted this to be more dark then sad. Guess I kind of went the wrong way with it ^^;

I wanted to show the human side of Trowa, (before his facade of indifference that he know has in most of my ficlets), Kind of wanted to show how he got to how he is now. This challenge that you and Utopia created was a perfect idea, *huggles you both* ^_^

Thanks luv.

[no_utopia]

Oh... The well? I love the ideas in tbhis, the way Trowa learned to do kill people and such. Also love the last line.

Would you like a banner or an icon? :)

[no_utopia]

Well, I made you a banner anyway:

[7maxwell]

ahh sorry I didn't respond sooner luv ;__;

*squee* but the banner looks awesome! ^_^ Thanks! *gonna go pimp at GWA* bring in more ppl....