Self Pimpage for lj scribe

Sep 13, 2011 13:34

Yes, I've caved and done it again - I've entered the current lj_scribe prompt #31. The prompt was There's no such thing as vampires, right? A poem popped into my head, so I thought - why not?

It's a darkly humorous (or supposed to be) poem called Bedtime. If you like it, it would be great if you could pop over http://lj-scribe.livejournal.com/275077.html and ( Read more... )

prompt #31, poetry, writing challenge, lj_scribe, humour

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teddyradiator September 13 2011, 03:46:23 UTC
I thought it was utterly charming, devilishly clever and positively Seussian, in a Shel Silverstein sort of way!

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darklotus1211 September 13 2011, 03:55:43 UTC
High praise indeed! Thanks so much my dear!

As most of my poems and lyrics do, it popped into my head pretty much complete, and I must admit I gave myself a giggle as I was writing it.

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laurielover1912 September 13 2011, 18:04:22 UTC
A perfect little gem! This is so clever and reminds me of the best children's poems/night time tales. Really great - so glad the muse struck again. I'll pop over and +1 now.

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darklotus1211 September 15 2011, 01:30:15 UTC
Thanks my dear, it was nice to get an idea again, I must say.

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capcomplover September 13 2011, 21:04:50 UTC
+1 with pleasure.

Lilting, funny. Pace of reading given by the great rhythm.

Giggling and squirming in equal measure.

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darklotus1211 September 13 2011, 23:26:36 UTC
Glad you liked it *evil giggle* and thanks for the +1 my dear!

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