Fic - Slip of the Tongue

May 20, 2010 21:35

Title: Slip of the Tongue
Summary: As usual, they can never do things simply. 
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: Major hints towards Unending. Think that's it, though.
A/N: Yeah, so my brabbits have been holding out on me for months. Just two days ago, they actually allowed me to get a few sentences out in Word...and then completely took over the entire ( Read more... )

brabbit attacks, dv fic, fic, fanfic

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dannysgirlsg1 May 25 2010, 18:18:29 UTC
Thank you! :)

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magnavox_23 May 21 2010, 05:23:18 UTC
Of course Daniel would be the one to get it out of Teal'c! :D

Mmm, jealous!Daniel. :)

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dannysgirlsg1 May 25 2010, 18:19:37 UTC
Not sure if Daniel got it out of Teal'c, or Teal'c finally came out and said SOMETHING b/c he was over watching Daniel act like an ignorant jackass when it came to the woman he clearly loved madly. XP

I couldn't help throwing Jealous!Daniel in there!

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dannysgirlsg1 May 25 2010, 18:20:00 UTC
And thank you! :)

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cleothemuse May 21 2010, 07:29:21 UTC
Bwahaha! Teal'c won't kill Daniel, but he might loom menacingly for a while :D

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dannysgirlsg1 May 25 2010, 18:23:27 UTC
And Daniel would probably just roll his eyes and bitch at Vala for ratting him out! XD

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cleothemuse May 25 2010, 18:27:18 UTC
...and Vala will offer make-up sex as recompense :D

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dannysgirlsg1 May 25 2010, 20:37:29 UTC
Oh geeze, this is sounding more and more like a potential fic with each new comment!

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nytegoddess May 22 2010, 18:46:04 UTC
commenting from my phone because I locked myself out of LJ on the laptop...

I loved this! I love the slightly off-balence feel to the whole thing, that's some thing I really like about Daniel and Vala's relationship. They knock each other off-kilter in such a way that they perfectly balance the other out.

And Hot 'n Cold is one of my top ten D/V songs, so extra love for the lyrics!

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dannysgirlsg1 May 25 2010, 18:21:59 UTC
I'm glad the off-balanced nature of it worked well. I figured it would since it is a DV fic, but never can be too sure about these things!

I had Hot N Cold stuck in my head while writing it, so that's why I couldn't help throwing the lyrics in there.

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