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missodell December 22 2015, 09:26:34 UTC
This is a very nice chapter ( ... )

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jonesingjay December 22 2015, 10:15:40 UTC
I'm not sure if you're familiar with 'Mad Men' but the Stan in this story is the Stan in that television show before he started working in that advertising office ( ... )

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missodell December 22 2015, 11:41:50 UTC
Oh really? It's a long time since I watched Mad Men. I can't remember the details very well. I imagined Stan as someone skinnier and a lot cuter, lol. It's funny how you picture characters, isn't it? Like me, you don't go into physical descriptions very deeply. (I don't think you need to unless its important, and I think shopping list style descriptions are boring ( ... )

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suburban_boho December 25 2015, 10:50:09 UTC
Very nice chapter, this one is!

Poor Ringo. Already feeling like a bit of an outsider still in the group- obviously not a feeling that he should have but feelings of insecurity and otherness and even jealousy cannot be held to logical standards and I do think Ringo was certainly susceptable to those types of feelings maybe a bit more than most. So it stands to reason that, after having secured some sort of date with a desirable girl (even if it is just to go site seeing, it's still something), when his more conventionally popular mate comes in to offer advice like Ringo's just a teenager who knows nothing about romance and people,that said advice would feel patronizing as well as make Ringo slightly jealous ( ... )

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jonesingjay December 26 2015, 05:23:09 UTC
Thank you ( ... )

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