Fic: Befriend the End of the Line 1/1 (MCR/TYV, R, Bob/Ryan)

May 17, 2010 12:55

Title: Befriend the End of the Line
Status: Complete
Fandom: My Chemical Romance/The Young Veins(Panic at the Disco)
Word Count: roughly 5,700
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone in or related to bandom.
Pairing: Bob Bryar/Ryan Ross
Rating: R
Betas and helpers: b_dsaint for the quick beta, ladyfoxxx and sly_fuck for the help.
Authors Notes: Written for the timestamp meme. chuckaloonieRead more... )

fanfic, prisonverse, bob/ryan, mcr, bandom, slash

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nev_longbottom May 17 2010, 17:42:40 UTC
Best thing to wake up to in the morning, ever!!!!!
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

A date! Patty melt. Melanie. Oh, why so awesome universe?

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dancinbutterfly May 18 2010, 12:20:36 UTC
I didnt want to spoil you! I almost told you but I was like "Nah, she'll find it when she's ready" and you did. SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! *hugs* They're love. They should have many dates. Next time? Somewhere with table clothes. It's Bob's turn after all. Thanks so much for reviewing bb.

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egelantier May 17 2010, 18:46:45 UTC
i've literally re-read the main story just today and thought 'wouldn't it be nice if there was some sort of timestamp coda to it?' and then there was! clearly it's magic.

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dancinbutterfly May 18 2010, 12:22:34 UTC
*bows* your wish my command - clearly. Glad you liked it! Thanks for leaving a comment.

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slashxmistress May 17 2010, 19:06:11 UTC
Damn. What I really wanted was a Brian/Gerard coda/sequel thingy- but I'll take this! Sooo many levels of awesome here-including the subtle JWalk cameo \o/.

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dancinbutterfly May 18 2010, 12:39:08 UTC
I totally have Brian and Gerards. Its in my brain just be patient. I'm really glad you liked this though. Thanks for reviewing anyway

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slashxmistress May 18 2010, 17:51:35 UTC
OOoh- I can be patient, sure *sits on hands* That will be worth the wait!

I'm not sure if I say it enough -sometimes I zip through and tag these things on the go and don't leave a proper comment -but your amazing bb! Absolutely amazing <3

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laniew1 May 17 2010, 19:33:03 UTC
What an excellent thing to come home from work to. This is absolutely wonderful, thank you so much for continuing the prompt! And just so you, I will take every little scrap that you feel like giving us from this universe. :D

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dancinbutterfly May 18 2010, 12:39:43 UTC
:D I love this universe. I always knew I was going to take the ball and run with it. You just gave me an excuse. :D Glad you liked it!

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icanbreakthesky May 18 2010, 04:32:50 UTC
I made an embarrassing flaily hand thing when I realized what this was. I know I said (I think I said?) I was totally content to leave them safe and together in their bunk, but. Yeah, this is even better. The only thing that might be better would be, like, the tender hot reunion sex. I love that Ryan cultivates a life outside of Bob and away from who prison made him be, and how devoted Bob is. Of course he loves you, Ryan. Of course he'd come after you! Ugh, my heart! My heart for that stubborn boy! And that kiss! Very hot.

Is Melanie a gauge for Spencer and Jon's reactions to Bob showing up as well?

Also, I love how Frank acts like...well, Frank, but he also seems to be a pretty good don-in-training.

Saw a little typo though. curly read hair in Melanie's description.

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dancinbutterfly May 18 2010, 12:41:36 UTC
I honestly TRIED to get them to sex. It felt...Not right. I wanted to though. I just, yeah. I'm so glad that you caught all the things I put in - about Bob and Ryan and who they've both become and will be. Melanie's more to show that Ryan's been living his life, at least a little more than to speak to the boys' reaction. She's FAR less invested in him than they are so she'll be less...protective. And hey, any excuse for mob!Frank.

Thanks for catching that flub. I fixed it. Thanks for the review and the help! Cheers.

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icanbreakthesky May 18 2010, 23:23:34 UTC
I definitely think this suits them as a leaving off place, though! I mean, it's so full of promise and hope (a lot like the ending of the main fic, with the added bonus of being safely out of prison!) that leaving them off there does feel like a really good place. Going back to Ryan's would mean the other guys and immersing more into his life as well, complicating their reunion beyond being their reunion. Especially if Spencer and Jon are going to be protective. Good thing Bob's got a knack for winning people over! ...right?

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icanbreakthesky May 19 2010, 04:05:51 UTC
I don't mean to be presumptive! I just, yeah, really liked this verse.

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