Seriously, watching this fic grow has been awesome.
Gabe as a crazy cult leader (and not like, cultverse leader, but ACTUAL SCARY CULT leader is amazing. Frank as the kickass heir to the Mob is awesome and believable (and still reminds me of my cousin, like WHOA). I love his utter devotion to his family and Jamia and his whole code of how things are done. Gerard just trying to make it through his time (he's not scary, how could anyone think he's scary?! awwwww so sweet) and he and Brian are \o/ wayyy adorable! (be prepared for me to ask for that follow up we talked about, for reals) Pete PEEEETEEEE. possibly my favourite character in this fic, because he tries so hard! (LOL check fraud) he's built himself this
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*hugs* I so very much couldnt have done this without you. Seriously lady, you saved my ass and kept me going in a big way. I adore you and all you stand for!
well. okay. what a fucking epic thing to read on a wednesday morning. i haven't properly read or commented on fic in a long fucking time, so i don't think this comment is going to be any good, but i - enjoyed this. i mean, it was fucked-up all over the place, but you really made the bandpeople into some crazyinteresting characters, & the whole unravelling warfare between the groups was totally gripping. i'm trying to think of a better way to say "this was well-written!" but, there you go. this was well-written. i was looking forward to reading this whenever you mentioned writing it, & this really was worth the wait. (favourite: frank, for some reason, & his mobster family & his waiting for jamia on the other side. ♥)
If I got you out of non-posting, thats kind of praise enough. Thank you so much for taking the time, especially considering that you dont normally. It makes it so much more precious for the rarity. I'm thrilled you liked it, you dont even know. Thanks so much for reviewing. Really.
No, darling, thank you. I'm so glad that you hopped on the train and took the ride anyway, even though Bob/Ryan isnt your default destination. I really appreciate the show of faith and that you took the time to review. *hugs*
Oh, this is just epic. Everyone is so fucked up and gah *g*, I love every bit of it. I wish I was more eloquent in my comment but all I can say is JFC, don't ever stop writing \o/.
I dont know! IT JUST DID! :D And its Otter. Cuz, I'm a canon whore and it has to be someone Gee no longer talks too. *headdesk* Yes, I'm obsessive. :D I'm so glad that you liked it. Thank you times a million for reviewing!
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EDIT: OK, REAL COMMENT TIME!!
I need to start with quoting you, way back on Feb 1. This is what you said about this fic, do you remember?
dancinbutterfly: mostly its just snippets , not anyhting with cohesive plot
lol and my response 4 hours and 3 POVs later:
b_dsaint dude you wrote fic
Seriously, watching this fic grow has been awesome.
Gabe as a crazy cult leader (and not like, cultverse leader, but ACTUAL SCARY CULT leader is amazing.
Frank as the kickass heir to the Mob is awesome and believable (and still reminds me of my cousin, like WHOA). I love his utter devotion to his family and Jamia and his whole code of how things are done.
Gerard just trying to make it through his time (he's not scary, how could anyone think he's scary?! awwwww so sweet) and he and Brian are \o/ wayyy adorable! (be prepared for me to ask for that follow up we talked about, for reals)
Pete PEEEETEEEE. possibly my favourite character in this fic, because he tries so hard! (LOL check fraud) he's built himself this ( ... )
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God, THANK YOU.
This is the first epic bigbang we've had, and it delivered in every possible way. I'm not even on the Bob/Ryan train and I like where it's going.
See, fic like this is fulfilling.
<3<3<3
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God, how can a story that ends with everyone either still in prison or dead feel so optimistic?
PS
One question: which Matt did Gee attack, Cortez or Pessiler?
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