[KHR Fic] Second Taste (Dino x Bianchi)

[dame_batsie]

Title: Second Taste
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Dino/Bianchi - steps; "her hips swing ahead of his taste" (for khrfest)
Warnings: mention of past sex
Summary: Dino, a former playboy, runs into an old flame at a bar.

Comments

[selenas_magick]

Oh wow, this is so beautifully written! I love this couple and fics about them are so rare.

I almost picked this prompt, but I doubt I could have done it justice. Not in the way you have here. :D

[dame_batsie]

Thanks so much. Awww, that would've been awesome to see another interpretation of the prompt. Maybe next time. Maybe I'll be the anon prompter, tee hee

I honestly haven't read any other fanfics solely based on this couple, so if you have any recs, I'd love to read them. XD

[selenas_magick]

One of the reasons I didn't claim it was because I just have no clue how to write Bianchi. Hee! Maybe I'll get over my fear of writing Bianchi with the right prompt... maybe. ; )

Idk if you've read Bad Girls, it's posted at filthypages. I've really only read one other fic besides that one, and it was awhile ago. At the time I'd never thought much about the pairing, and I can't remember the name of it, or who wrote it. I keep meaning to try and track that one down...

[dame_batsie]

Actually, I haven't read that one. It's pretty sexy, mmmmm. Thanks for the rec!

[dame_batsie]

All right! Another Dino/Bianchi fan. For the longest time, I thought I was the only one. XD

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

[dame_batsie]

:O I saw that request and put it on my long to-fill list. So hopefully, one of these days, I'll get around to it. XD

[mychemical_lust]

UGH. ILU.

DINO/BIANCHI. LOVE IT.

This was perfect, so in character! And I kind of liked the ending! Because that of course, would totally happen! People forget that Bianchi can be a bit bitter and badass. And I liked how Dino was the prince in shining armor, but still a bit slow. xD

[dame_batsie]

Thanks! I'm pleased that you thought it was in character.

Glad to see another Dino/Bianchi supporter. I don't think I've read any other fics of them other than what I've written. So sad because they need more love. :(

[dame_batsie]

I ship Dino/Bianchi LIKE WHOA, and I just really, really like the obscure pairings. XD

I agree with you on the 2nd person POV -- I'm not quite fond of it myself, but I thought I'd give it a try just to see how it turned out because I'm experimental like that. Maintaining this POV was more difficult than I thought; I kept slipping into 3rd person in places, and it took tons of rereads to smooth out the inconsistencies before posting. Needless to say, I definitely won't be revisiting that for awhile, ha ha. I'm glad it wasn't totally distracting for you, and thank you for your comment. <3

[penombrelilas]

/noms fic. Delicious~ I like the sensuous pacing of the story. And the part where Dino wonders if Bianchi had become a better cook xD

[dame_batsie]

Thank you. XD

I can just imagine the domestic lulz when Dino and Bianchi are together. XDDD